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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-09-18 02:52 PM




When Voices Talk

I believe
            I do
                
and I would hear
voices speak,
soft, softer, softly…

they hover ‘round
give me ups when I’m down
and like seeds planted
in the ground

grow and twine
‘round my rhyme…

oh, I hear voices
come to me,
and pull me gently
toward the sea

a voice of remember
a voice, recalled,
a voice, like yours,
and I, enthralled,

say

Hello

Is it you?

I believe…
             Oh yes, I do….




© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-18 02:55 PM


I'm a believer, in poetic thoughts and kind words, all of which I find in abundance on these pages.
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By the sea
2 posted 2002-09-18 03:03 PM


I believe those voices belong to your muse.
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3 posted 2002-09-18 03:05 PM


I love this

Cold hands means a warm heart

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4 posted 2002-09-18 03:08 PM


There are voices...that soothe us..
voices that move us..
voices right out of the blue!
But the voice I hold dear..
That I long to hear..
Can only come from you!!


Oh yes Karilea...I believe!!

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5 posted 2002-09-18 04:13 PM




(smiles) Oh Karilea, I believe it with all my heart and your words are just among the believable, God Bless You, this is unbelievably beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-09-18 04:16 PM


Just put you ear against the seashell and
hear the ocean's roar....Listen closely
and you might hear yet more...

Nicely done KJ...Good Afternoon Sunny One...

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7 posted 2002-09-18 04:16 PM


Karilea

To believe, just close your eyes and listen.

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8 posted 2002-09-18 04:18 PM


A voice in itself can sometimes be oh so magical... Wonderful rhymes.
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9 posted 2002-09-18 04:18 PM


a comforting feel to this one!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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10 posted 2002-09-18 04:18 PM


This is so beautiful, Karilea...
I hear voices too! sometimes I just know its my must talking to me,  and I talk to myself often....
Maybe its a poet thing... we are just so connected to words
~ poetic chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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The heart of you
11 posted 2002-09-18 04:22 PM


We must listen, for they know, all too well.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Kethry
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12 posted 2002-09-18 05:05 PM


the voices of the nature's song
can lift your heart to keep you strong
and voices of romantic night
can fill your heart with sweet delight
listen, listen hear the sound
of whispered voices all around.

I believe, in your magical voices and in you.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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13 posted 2002-09-18 05:18 PM


Those who do not listen--miss soooo much!

My heart, my mind, and my ears are open!

This was delightful, dear Sunshine!

~ listening all the while ~

Earth Angel

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14 posted 2002-09-18 05:26 PM


My dear I so enjoyed this. Be still and listen and it is amazing what we will hear.

Thank you for reminding us to to take the time to listen....

Hugs, Marti


Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

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15 posted 2002-09-18 06:15 PM


this poem is really good, thank you for sharing. I hear voices (I do) They told me to come here and read this poem, they often tell me to do things I don't want to do or wouldn't do.

Andrea

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16 posted 2002-09-19 02:54 PM


very uplifting I needed that one
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Deep in the heart
17 posted 2002-09-19 02:59 PM


"I believe for every drop of rain that falls a flower grows
I believe that somewhere in the darkest night a candle glow
I believe for every one who go astray
someone will come to show the way"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

and you have

=========
"I Believe"
Words & music by Erwin Drake, Irvin Graham, Jimmy Shirl, Al Stillman.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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