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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-09-19 10:11 AM

Tendencies To Touch An Emotion

It is tendencies to touch an emotion
often making the reader ask why
or giving the gift of gentle recall
that brings a tear to their eyes.

A sharing of hopes and dreams
memories held through the years
a laying of hearts on the line
throughout the joy and tears.

Heartstrings are played in softness
words are written in sweet release
to share this moment so precious
of sweet tranquility and peace.

The wondrous writing of a poet
words are pure poetry in motion
a very special sort of person
with tendencies to touch an emotion.

{dedicated to the bright sun in my days
who always knows how to touch the reader!}

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-19-2002 07:53 PM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-09-19 10:14 AM

And this is indeed what you do,
Donna, each and every time you
share your poems with us...

thank you so much for penning a

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-09-19 10:17 AM

Gentle Spirit
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-19 10:23 AM

This is absolutely lovely. From your comment at the bottom of the poem, it appeared to me that you were writing about our beloved Sunshine---if you were, I totally concur!---but may I also add, that what you have written applies to you as well!

P.S. This new photo of yours is so creative and mystical and ethereal and lovely!

~ May Sunshine continue to light up your day!

EA

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-09-19 10:24 AM

This is absolutely lovely. From your comment at the bottom of the poem, it appeared to me that you were writing about our beloved Sunshine---if you were, I totally concur!---but may I also add, that what you have written applies to you as well!

P.S. This new photo of yours is so creative and mystical and ethereal and lovely!

~ May sunshine continue to light up your day!

EA

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise

5 posted 2002-09-19 10:33 AM

And there is nothing better than sunshine and memories to brighten our day with soft and pleasing emotions. Especially if written by an admired poet.

This is was very enjoyable to read.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

passing shadows
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displaced

6 posted 2002-09-19 10:34 AM

you're very touching yourself there GS! wonderful write

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

7 posted 2002-09-19 10:38 AM

Wonderful!
That bright sun can be so invigorating, huh

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

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8 posted 2002-09-19 11:05 AM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Donna, we are always so blessed to read your beautiful words you share with us all, you sure do know how to touch my heart as you always bring sunshine to us all! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

texasrose
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9 posted 2002-09-19 07:36 PM

I believe that all poets have such tendencies. You my poet friend are included in that circle. Hugs to you.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-09-19 08:07 PM

Gentle Spirit - yes, yes indeed....

BC

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-09-19 08:19 PM

A lovely tribute to Karilea, Donna...
beautifully penned.
I love your new pic too

~ chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Auguste

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By the sea

12 posted 2002-09-19 09:43 PM

I do believe I'll also keep this one, Donna.

We all write for different reasons. I write because I want the reader to glimpse my feelings and know they are so much like their own. I also write to share a part of who I am. This is beautiful, my friend. *hugs*

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

13 posted 2002-09-19 10:15 PM

This is a keeper for sure Donna.
Beautiful...and our Sun is so deserving.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

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USA

14 posted 2002-09-19 10:16 PM

glowing, living portrait tribute
to the Sun-Shining-Bright.

Donna, you DO have a way of putting
frosting on the cake, dear lady.

jeff

sigheyes
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the winds of destiny

15 posted 2002-09-21 07:37 PM

This wonderful poem encompasses so many of the writers here at Passions. Back to the top with it.

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