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My words and I
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My words and I |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
There's no place for me to go I am you and you are my life I drown my sorrows in you I succumb to my pain My smiles are gone is time to feel my pain I must grow up and face my fears but instead I cry with you and we drink the beauty of love and we give it life painfully Yearning again for the moment when tormented by my own doings I will seek you and you will embrace me and I will fall for you Not knowing where my heart is not knowing where my soul is lost in myself like water in the sand Desperately trying to put pieces of me together to make sense of this senseless self my words and I |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
You get better and better every day! [This message has been edited by amusemi (09-18-2002 09:05 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
...lost in myself, like water in the sand... What an exceptional and brilliant portrayal. ThisDiamond |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome write. Enjoyed. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
walker - your words make sense in this writing, though sad ones they are... BC |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Sometimes the words become such a part of us. Enjoyed your poem. |
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