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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-09-18 04:30 AM

I simply can't believe my eyes.
My God, this thing is beautiful.
I see the veins within her wing...
a poet's heart in fluttering...
right here NOW...
upon the screen.
I watch the moth
in mock of ME...
if she could?
she'd eat through screen
to burst aflame
(a poet's dream)
oh the wings turn lavender
when she lands on pages blue--
She was so still as I wrote this...
silently, so much like you.

Now at rest, upon black frame.
Trying to avoid the fame
that her flight of beauty claims--
she hides--but she will fly again.

*   *   *

love ya Jan.

*   *   *

Um...Janet...not kidding...she's still most gorgeously there...I wish I had a teeny tiny cup of raspberry tea...sigh... and?

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-18-2002 04:32 AM).]

Elizabeth Cor
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since 2000-10-13

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Over the river and through the woods

1 posted 2002-09-18 05:10 AM

"I see the veins within her wing"
"oh the wings turn lavender
when she lands on pages blue"
"Now at rest, upon black frame.
...
she hides--but she will fly again."

sigh. id try for something more eloquent if it might truly add anything more... but, simply, k: beautiful.

you write the most stunning, appreciative tributes.

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-09-18 05:18 AM

I hope ya didn't think me brilliant there...I am actually looking at the most beautiful moth...STILL THERE...upper right hand corner of my screen....giggle...and? she has "jan" tattooed on her tiny little arse!

Elizabeth Cor
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since 2000-10-13

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Over the river and through the woods

3 posted 2002-09-18 05:28 AM

if anything? now that i "get it", i love it even more, mi lady...

~grins & giggles~ @ the tattoo... thats just going to send me off for minutes now... lol...

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-09-18 06:41 AM

This is decidely worth more than a cup
of raspberry tea...I think a crumpet must
attend the party...

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2002-09-18 08:06 AM

(a poet's dream)
oh the wings turn lavender
when she lands on pages blue--
She was so still as I wrote this...
silently, so much like you.
==================================

I wish you could see the smile on me mothy face right now....Isnt that the coolest thing...I have had the same thing happen..its the pretty blue screen...works the same as the flame

And? as ALWAYS we are once again in sync...the timing of this is classic twin...
The other day Rachel and I pull up to bank drive thru...and there sits a beautiful, tiny orange stripe moth on the drawer that holds the cylinder. When I pointed the coincidence of me pulling up to that one out of 6 lanes to choose from, Rach just shakes her head and gives me her classic "oh please spare me" look. rofl
The next day...a moth flies out of the mailbox when I opened it... then yesterday I get ready to get in shower..and there is one sitting on the tile wall...later my son caught one in the hallway and let it go out the front door...Rachel sat there shaking her head...and? when I said to her teasingly "us moths are every where" she retorts..."Yeah...everywhere but where you are SUPPOSED to be."

Thats me girlie-girl!!!!!

Thank you for this KA..needless to say its headed for a frame to sit next to "Papillon"
and Im rolling at the tattoo reply...me thinks I need to have the same done...
Only me arse 'taint tiny

LOL

love you me twin...

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2002-09-18 08:10 AM

ya got me so giddy...
I forgot to click the library button

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2002-09-18 08:20 AM

Ok...is it Mercury retro? ... the poem didnt bump when I replied before???
trying again.....

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2002-09-18 08:28 AM

Yes...m'twin...retro..until Oct. 4...it's really not so devasting if you learn to ride the tides...

good advice for the ocean!

love you lady...and yes...that was a lovely lady moth in shades of YOU... and I always wondered why my heart fluttered twice!

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2002-09-18 08:42 AM

and I am laughing here cuz the poem didnt bump till YOU replied to it...
Remember when someone asked you "if we were the same person"

ROFL....
The moth has Rons new "same computer" software confused ROFL

and? NOW you tell me Im flying during retro????
Oh well..I'll take me chances...I'd walk on me lips to go on this trip

(and you know I can) ROFL

And KA...send me that addy if ya want a post card from the beach baby!!

Martie

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10 posted 2002-09-18 11:22 AM

Serenity

Some things just charm the socks of me, if I was wearing any...this would be one.

Mistletoe Angel

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11 posted 2002-09-18 11:26 AM

(smiles) Oh Karen, I love this, I can tell our wonderful friend Janet is delighted reading this as I am, she always spreads her love and heart here to us all like a moth continuing to kiss the lightbulb and I am blessed to have her as a true friend just as you are, sweet friend, God Bless You Both, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

bsquirrel

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12 posted 2002-10-03 03:59 PM

A poem like this
is worth bringing back,
all aflutter.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

13 posted 2002-10-03 04:43 PM

Thanks to my favorite squirrel, I missed this mothy one the first time around.
COOL! Totally cool poem.
Lavender moth image is flying over my screen now.....

serenity blaze
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14 posted 2002-10-03 05:17 PM

Oh dear god/dess...

"Yes...m'twin...retro..until Oct. 4...it's really not so devasting if you learn to ride the tides..."

Eyes open in startle--I should be more careful about what I type!

brian madden
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ireland

15 posted 2002-10-03 09:25 PM

K, do you know how rare that type of moth is? one in a zillon. You could get a good price for that moth. LOL
seriously, a wonderful poem, beautiful tribute.

El riesgo vive siempre!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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16 posted 2003-01-14 01:27 AM

It's over long before her fall from grace, she's never been this far from safe.
Trying to see where it all began, she'll never be the same again.

serenity blaze
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17 posted 2003-01-14 09:11 AM

even when I hide? you know

love you Jan.

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2003-02-14 03:56 AM

Very nice...James

Janet Marie
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19 posted 2004-06-13 02:13 PM

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