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regards2you
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0 posted 2002-10-07 01:19 PM




Warm
dark forest.
Slanted
silver rays
of
sunlight
quietly changing
shades of green
into
shimmering
stillness.
This,
the other side
of my heart.
This,
my deepest deep,
where no one
is allowed but,
God.

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-10-07 01:22 PM


Patricia, this is so good. You are a great poet. Thanks for sharing.

With Love,
Ethel

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-10-07 01:55 PM


Awesome work here

Cold hands means a warm heart

secretlife
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3 posted 2002-10-07 03:25 PM


What agreat poems.. I love it..

Nice..


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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4 posted 2002-10-07 03:45 PM


Regards2You~
A belated WELCOME TO PASSIONS from me~

This is really just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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regards2you
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5 posted 2002-10-07 04:17 PM


Ethel, thanks, so glad you like it. And, please call me Pat. You are such a love

The-Loner-23, Thank you so much

Secretlife,  how good to know its loved, means a lot to me

And, Marge, thanks so much for the warm welcome from you. I am glad you took the time. It helps me to feel included and a 'part of'.  Kind of you and a big hug back to you and big, big smile. With lots of love, Pat
  

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-10-07 05:52 PM


regards2you
A wonderfuk write, enjoyed

Suetang
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7 posted 2002-10-07 07:27 PM


Beautiful words, very much enjoyed.  Welcome to Passions.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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8 posted 2002-10-07 08:03 PM


Very touching.
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

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9 posted 2002-10-07 08:06 PM


This is so beautiful!!
This touched me deeply.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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10 posted 2002-10-07 10:26 PM


this is a very serene peak into your soul.

::applause::

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11 posted 2002-10-07 10:57 PM


oh I do love this and I'm going to tuck it into my library!
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12 posted 2002-10-07 10:57 PM


A sanctuary within the heart where only God is allowed entrance!

Impressive!

Thanks for sharing!

regards2you
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13 posted 2002-10-07 11:27 PM


Seymour, thank you, kind sir  

Suetang, thank you for the welcome, hugs back and glad you liked it  

Krissie, thank you, it's a good place to go Krissie, just close your eyes and visualize...ahhhhhhhh calming

Enchantress, happy you're touched

Sea, oh, how nice, Thanks

Radrook, what a wonderful way to put it. Thank you, much.

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

regards2you
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14 posted 2002-10-07 11:33 PM


Goidsparkless, yes, we need to have a special place for God, but He doesn't mind me sharing...afterall, it's His trees....big smile as I thank you for the applause..means a lot..

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

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15 posted 2004-05-28 04:08 AM


precious
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