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The Crimson Knight
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since 2002-09-16
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Reno, NV

0 posted 2002-09-17 08:55 PM


Weave me a spell
~with fingers long and thin
~~softly moving down my cheek and chin,
~~~deftly stoking my emotions from my soul.
Hold me enthrall
~with body that entices me
~~by the movement you come to be
~~~warming with flesh never agin cold.
Delight me now
~with word spoken softly
~~meanings for no one but me
~~~as we both grow contently old.


© Copyright 2002 Dirk Bishop - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-09-17 09:00 PM


WOW!!  This is beautiful!
Stunning...romantic...and...
oh such a huge *SIGH* maker!
~Magical Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

The Crimson Knight
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Reno, NV
2 posted 2002-09-17 09:06 PM


Please sigh for me
All through the winter nights
Sharing the fire and sweet delights
For next summer when the heat returns
Your sighing breeze will cool the burns

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-17 09:50 PM




(smiles) Oh Dirk, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, and may every night sparkle with starlit promises and hopes for you, this is bright and beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dirk, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-09-17 09:52 PM


The Crimson Knight - keep writing romance like this and you'll never grow old in mind...

BC

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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VA
5 posted 2002-09-17 10:03 PM


methinks Chivalry is not dead, thank you for bringing back hope into my life! and methinks I'm in love
into arthurian legend perchance? just curious..

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 337
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6 posted 2002-09-17 10:13 PM


'Tis  magical, Knight,
blue-blackness to weave
to celebrate
this time of eve
a spell or two
or maybe of three
emotions to share,
together as we
dance this darkness
into the morn,
with a touch of each
a spell is born,
for once the movement
begins its pace
and softest of hands
lay patterns of trace
who offers Thee more
than this Lady of Grace
enticed by lips
that mine shall embrace...


So lovely, Your verse,
Lady Ollyne

[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (09-17-2002 10:13 PM).]

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