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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-09-14 08:59 PM

Moon Rhyme
For Margie girl

If the moons glow was written in rhyme
If the sea flowed at a certain time
If the stars dance knew only one song
Or if life paused before it moved on
I know they would pause and wait for you
For you know them well you surely do
You write the stars shine in softest hue
You paint dreamer’s sky its what you do
Where wisdom’s needed your touch is there
And where souls need help you show you care
Where mystery baffles you shed light
Illuming the dark and shining night
You are the find of mind that frees me
Brushing my soul with real clarity

Marsha

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-14 09:02 PM

This is very beautiful. the words touched my heart.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-14 09:25 PM

So beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-09-14 09:49 PM

MarshaLove~
I'm just gonna take this one REAL personal~
You gave my heart a lift and for that I thank you immensely~

I simply cannot wait to give you the biggest *hugs* on this side of the ocean~
I love you gal~
Thank you from the heart of my little bottom~

PiPITIS ... it's a happening~
*Huggers*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-09-14 10:42 PM

Marsha - m'mmmmm, such as it is....

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-09-15 06:45 PM

I didn't see the little part about being
for Marge...but after reading a few lines...
it was certainly obvious...and deservedly
so.... Marge is all these things and
more..

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-09-15 06:52 PM

Marsha, of course being a moonchild, I delight when you write of the moon...and when for Marge that makes it doubly special.
hugsss to both of you
M

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-09-15 08:13 PM

A wonderful tribute, my girl...
BTTT with you!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2002-09-15 08:43 PM

How utterly pretty.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

9 posted 2002-09-16 12:49 PM

love is the brush
that can paint us
in colors only known
to the artist

Enthralling writing, Nance!
The best of evening's to you
JkF

fishop
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 79
ohio

10 posted 2002-09-16 10:05 PM

I enjoyed the poem, and wish to offer this,If the sea flowed at a certain time perhaps it flowed some place in time. Please do not think i'm being critical, I haven't the right but I though at a certain time was an awkward point in your poem.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

11 posted 2002-09-17 12:38 PM

Thank you everyone but this is really just a little bit of nonsense I wrote, I only posted it for Margie girl, so if it has any merit it is only as a bit of fluff, nothing more.

Love you all

PiPITIS coming closer still

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

[This message has been edited by Marsha (09-17-2002 12:41 PM).]

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

12 posted 2002-09-17 09:24 PM

little miss mm

What a most delightful and beautiful poem dedicated to Marge, well penned and very much deserving and fitting.
Loved it very much, was a great read

~hugs~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2002-09-17 10:20 PM

MyMushyMarshaLove~
You write the NICEST fluff I've ever read~

The 'merit' is that it touched my heart on a day when my heart needed touching ... and for that ... it is a treasure to me !

Oh Lordy ... we do need to be 'nice' don't we ????
That's fine and dandy my FRIEND ...
ME WUB YOU SO MUCH~

Let's head for Tampa and raise a little
POETIC ****~ (MY asterisks)

Need any aces ?
GO 'fish'~
Love you to pieces~
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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