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Magician
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since 2002-08-14

Posts 126

0 posted 2002-09-17 03:03 PM

She is sunshine of most glorious day
Of bright smiles given to warm empty soul
And though she does not know she lights my way
I am here because of her, now made whole
Bright, as a thousand other jealous stars
Their hatred eternal, barely restrained
So close almost to touch, yet oh so far
Still I can feel her heat like licking flames
To worship her my goddess of the sky
The only thing that is keeping me here
To not look at her with unshielded eyes
Is the only thing on earth that I fear

Her spirit like the sun powerful burns
I bathed in her glow, continue to yearn

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-17 03:04 PM

Yes sunshine is good. I like this poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-17 03:11 PM

(sigh) Oh Magician, this is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, I hope now your heart is filled with her sunshine and your yearnings have been replaced with comfort and joy! (big hugggssssss) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2002-09-17 03:16 PM

Just don't forget your SP15. I like this one.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

4 posted 2002-09-17 03:18 PM

Gotta say, that was well written.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-09-17 03:19 PM

Flowing down the page in sensual glistening drops to be savored. I like! ThisDiamond

smitty-j
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 72
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-09-17 03:22 PM

My gosh..I think I do know you (^_~) tremendous!
J

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-09-17 03:27 PM

The Magician has returned
by name unknown to some
he weaves a spell and thus discerns
poets, one by one

His gifts are plentiful, it's true
his acumen never less
He writes of sunshine, in her blue
but it's poets that are blessed...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-09-17 03:32 PM

Your subject could not be more deserving

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-09-17 03:42 PM

BlueEyes
Member

since 2002-08-30

Posts 152
TX, USA

10 posted 2002-09-17 04:27 PM

wow....very lucky girl, the one to whom this was written...

good writing

BlueEyes

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2002-09-17 05:37 PM

Well she definately brightens your days for sure. Very well done!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2002-09-17 05:40 PM

Magician~
This is beautifully done, and I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-17-2002 05:41 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2002-09-17 07:47 PM

lucky girl, indeed

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