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Thine Heart Of Crimson
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Thine Heart Of Crimson |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Flutter thine heart, thy wakened soul, thy breath and beat of crimson vein. As dragons fly above yon knoll betwixt the sun, the drizzling rain. Carry thine self in courage well ‘pon leave of walls beyond the gate. Let not thine mind on fear thee dwell or in the maw thee wilt be bait. For green of skin and gold of eye doth fly the skies in seek of flesh. Till shrill is borne thy maiden’s cry whence dawn becomes the day afresh. A soul of heart and brazen knight doth ride the dark of misty morn. To find and kill the wretched blight to ward the cry and tearful mourn. Thee shalt be thence mine heart to hold till time doth take mine own away. I shalt be there, once ever bold, this heart, my love, of thine wilt stay. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
  Sally forth, and do thee well for the maiden's heart doth swell and all await the plight of fear and do not let us shed a tear |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The wizardry of words unforgotten, unforsakened. Imagery is a certain key to all of your words. Great job yet again Barry. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! Oh my gosh, are you sure you didn't skip twenty generations? (big hugggsssss) This is awesome, sweet friend, I think that is the most chivalrous thing about love, to chase each others demons away with prowess and largesse and true compassion! (smiles) This is a mighty epic of a poem, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry I have no wish to be bait perhaps I'll stay behind the gate. You do the knight so well!  |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Loner, thanx, pleased you enjoyed this chivalrous piece of the past. KJ...OH, you know I do love that reply and the dragon....YEP I do!!!!! As thy whisper falls 'pon the ear of one Knight who holds thee dear, one steed shall run in lathered coat till hooves and I do cross thy moat. For in the castle of stone walls one heart is held to be of mine. As trumpets sound courageous calls I whisper back for thee art fine. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Craig, thanx my friend...good to see ya... Noah, thanx to you as well, this was another topic we could have taken to a duet... Martie...Yes M'lady, stay behind the gate and do not stray, for within the wall of stone thee should stay. JD. thank you much, don't see you often.. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
OMG! this is awesomely gorgeous ..wow..I am speechless for enuff to say..ya did a spectacular job of this and it's a keeper! aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Beautiful!!! DeaDiAmore |
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