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The Crimson Knight
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0 posted 2002-09-16 01:49 PM


To what ends must I go,
To what challenges must I meet,
To serve you in love,
To be the one that you will greet,
How can I be your one?

Be what your heart says,
Be true to your passions inside,
Be flowing of emotions
Be not afraid of me and hide,
I accept all you have done.

To be what we each are without the shame,
To accept what has been done without blame,
To be or not to be remains your choice,
To be speaking from the heart in one voice.



© Copyright 2002 Dirk Bishop - All Rights Reserved
Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2002-09-16 01:55 PM


Welcome to Passions!! ohh bestill my beating heart! *swoons* seriously loved it nonetheless..Sir Knight..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-16 02:00 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Awwwww, this is such a sensitive and romantic debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, may all the answers come to you both in time and may you always remain true to your heart and your dreams! Welcome to Passions, sweet Dirk, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dirk, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-16-2002 02:02 PM).]

The Crimson Knight
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3 posted 2002-09-16 02:25 PM


Dear Ceinwyn
Swoon as you may, I’ll catch you, hold you in my arms till you recover,
Set you right and guard your honor,  and befriend you now and ever,
Thank you for my first response here at passions.

Noah,
Time is the great healer and stealer, may it bring to you always the best
And take from you only those memories you wish to shed

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2002-09-16 02:35 PM



Dirk, a hearty Welcome to Passions!  It seems you have the gist of our little home down pat, and I think you will find yourself enjoying your days and evenings as you explore all that Passions has to offer!

Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-09-16 02:37 PM


Welcome to Passions Dirk, and what a wonderful first post you have given us.  I am going to enjoy reading more of your writings.  *s*

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2002-09-16 02:39 PM


Well done, Dirk! Welcome to Passions.

"Be not afraid of me and hide,
I accept all you have done."
Wow. Now that is the ultimate forgiveness line.



The Crimson Knight
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since 2002-09-16
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Reno, NV
7 posted 2002-09-16 02:45 PM


Sunshine / Karilea,
Bight words to guide the heart, emotions great you do impart
I will look for you sweet message.

Gentle,
It will be a joy to write them for you to read,
For kind reading make the writing sweeter.

Midnitesun, Mountain Lady,
To forgive is to know how to love
To love is to be able to forgive, for which of us can say we need no forgiveness?


Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 337
East Coast
8 posted 2002-09-16 03:14 PM


Sir Knight of Colour,

I have long awaited a Knight
to grace mine, words of a faraway time,
challenged only by Thy will,
needing only to flow
in the passions of mine heart.

Lay Thee, Thy words, upon these pages
and I, Lady Ollyne
shall be watching from afar,
dreaming of a night such as yours.

Greetings My Fine Knight,
Lady Ollyne


"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (09-16-2002 03:15 PM).]

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
9 posted 2002-09-16 03:16 PM


Welcome to passions!!! I love this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

The Crimson Knight
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10 posted 2002-09-16 03:25 PM


Lady Ollyne,
My banner is Crimson as the color of my steed,
I ride Harley to accomplish many noble deed,
To aid a sweet damsel would make the heart speed.

Loner23
Thanks for the gracious welcome

Nightshade
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just out of reach
11 posted 2002-09-16 03:29 PM


Well now, here you are. Thanks again for signing my post. Your poem is beautiful. I really enjoyed it. We have a Harley too!! Once again, Welcome and have fun!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

The Crimson Knight
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since 2002-09-16
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Reno, NV
12 posted 2002-09-16 03:48 PM


A noble and powerful steed, indeed,
May yours carry you peacefully down the eternal High way.

geenabee
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since 2002-09-10
Posts 59
NC--USA
13 posted 2002-09-16 03:53 PM


Woohoooo
all this swoonin and catchin and harley ridin is gettin' this pregnant lady very excited!!!!

really beautiful posting, and a personality I'll be watching for!!!

I just wanna be Juliet just once!

lol
gb

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
14 posted 2002-09-16 07:00 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
15 posted 2002-09-16 07:06 PM


Sir Knight

I enjoyed your first post...welcome to Passions!

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
16 posted 2002-09-16 07:17 PM


Welcome! I enjoyed this very much. Keep it coming to passions.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Magnus
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South Carolina, USA
17 posted 2002-09-16 07:34 PM


Nicely done Knight of Red...welcome to
Passions..hope you enjoy this home of
ours...

WhileIWasGone
Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486

18 posted 2002-09-16 08:06 PM


Very nice work...enjoyed very much!


DeaDiAmore

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
19 posted 2002-09-16 08:07 PM


I really enjoyed your poem, and escpecially your opening line~~~~
I've asked myself the same question,
the end of the earth is a long way to go but I hear it's worth going to with the right person of course.

I'm glad you're here~

The Crimson Knight
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since 2002-09-16
Posts 57
Reno, NV
20 posted 2002-09-16 08:11 PM


Juliet geenabee,
Swoon to me and I will catch you also
And put you on my noble steed and carry you off
To where and when you wish to go.

Enchantress Nancy,
I look forward to pleasing you
To let you enjoy

Martie,
Well welcomed well met

Magnus,
That is Crimson, liked to the Court of the Crimson King,
Red is a generic term, we are whom we serve and the deeds we do,
Be we friends.

Whileyouweregone,
Pleased to give enjoyment

Blues
It’s a pleasure to be somewhere where I am enjoyed
For nothing gives me more pleasure than giving pleasure

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