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arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

0 posted 2002-09-16 05:12 PM

once more

Turn your head and look at me,
A world of love for you awaits.
Your love alone can yet set free,
My heart behinds its fettered gates.
Your loving eyes will be the keys,
That turns these rusted locks.
Come to my arms and let us cease
The joys of youth so long forgot.
Some call us foolish to yet again
Brave love,life and old delight.
Foolish are we to brave the pain,
The suffering and the slights.
Let us risk all loss and shame,
For one glorious,wonderous night.

arthur sept02
ps -my spelling can be a little strange

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-16 05:13 PM

This is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2002-09-16 05:40 PM

Spelling is forgiven where love is not forgotten.
A sound and heartfelt sonnet ...
excellent work!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-09-16 06:14 PM

(smiles) Oh Michael, this is so lovely, sweet friend, I think the spelling is alright the way I see it, may true love always fill your heart and bring great comfort that prevails all fear and doubt, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-16-2002 06:14 PM).]

D edgar Grey
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)

4 posted 2002-09-16 06:19 PM

This was really sweet! For some reason (author's purpose?) I got them image of two older people falling in love again and being told that that was a foolish waste of time, but they knew they were right for each other and were happy together. Sorry. My mind takes off a lot! And yeah, I do keep a notebook around me all the time, but I still screw up!! Anyway, very pleasant piece. Keep it up!

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

5 posted 2002-09-16 06:49 PM

d edgar grey
you got it absolutely right
thats what it is
10/10
arthur

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-09-16 07:03 PM

Wonderful Arthur!
From your pen straight to my heart!
~Hugs across the pond~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2002-09-16 07:05 PM

Nice one arthur.

I liked

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

8 posted 2002-09-16 07:20 PM

I am with the others, well done.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

9 posted 2002-09-16 08:09 PM

awesome and loverly write...much enjoyed this delightful poem.
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2002-09-16 08:12 PM

this is very tender arthur - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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