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JasonE
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0 posted 2002-09-14 11:09 PM



As I lay here thoughts run and play, till one day a dream comes my way.
It sits and waits for imagination to start,
For it to begin it must come from the heart.
Tears are the medicine while laughter is the recipe,
Come and cry, soon you will see.
A spark awakes to show the way, while children dream away.
With every sigh comes a mystery within, look deep to see,
Boys become men.
Giggles bring songs to my dreams,
For in every fantasy seems to be a cloud of horses and knights
Overhead dragons are a flight.
Only a kiss of a heart and a tickel of a feather
Will bring dreams together.
I love to see dogs smiling to see kids chasing their tails,
To see adventure raise its sails.
Don't forget the dreams
They are there to show comfort to show love,
I praise the Lord for giving us dreams from above.
As I lay here thoughts run and play,
Tonight dreams will come my way.
Come and Dream!!!

© Copyright 2002 JasonE - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-14 11:18 PM


I love this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2002-09-14 11:20 PM


Very good poem JasonE.  My dreams never make any sense, but I still love to dream sometimes.  Thanks for sharing.  
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-09-14 11:22 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Very beautifully written first post!
Please check your email for a special greeting.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

JasonE
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4 posted 2002-09-14 11:35 PM


Thank you Miah, I can't always understand mine either.

Enchantress,
Thank you for the kind reply and the welcome.

JasonE
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since 2002-09-14
Posts 17

5 posted 2002-09-14 11:36 PM


the_loner_23
Thank you, I am glad you liked it.

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-09-15 12:32 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Jason, I find dreams to be miracles of creation by our Lord for us all to cherish and believe in magic of life! (big hugggssssss) od Bless You, sweet friend, this is a touching debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jason, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
7 posted 2002-09-15 04:14 AM


Hi Jason, welcome to passions

This is a great write and I loved the images it produced...thanks

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2002-09-15 06:57 AM



Welcome to Passions, Jason!  You have a nice way with sharing your thoughts, and I am looking forward to more of your poetry...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

JasonE
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since 2002-09-14
Posts 17

9 posted 2002-09-15 11:50 AM


Mistletoe Angel, Thanks for the welcome, I am glad you enjoyed the poem.


tracie66,  Thank you, I am glad you liked it also.


Sunshine,

Thank you sunshine, I look forward to being here.

TradingSpaces19
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since 2002-08-31
Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado
10 posted 2002-09-16 08:44 PM


Jason,

This poem was really good, I enjoyed it a lot. I hope to read more from you soon. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. I have a poem called "Dreams" and you should read it, it may not relate totally to your poem but I think it is good. Thank you again for sharing and feel free to email me.

Love,
Andrea
Kruckenberg

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
11 posted 2002-09-17 10:03 AM


Welcome to the PIP family of poets!
What a wonderful poem to start off with!

~ smiles ~
Earth Angel

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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2002-09-17 10:38 AM


Welcome to Passions.  
I look forward to more of your work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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