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Tears Fall Down
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Tears Fall Down |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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Tears fall down a young womans cheek She thought her guy was so meek But on day she walked in on him And her best friend Doing something she never wanted to see Her man was cheating She ran out of the house Her tears blinding her sight She rubs her eyes with all her might And runs out in the street A car hits her She lies in the street Her man holding her close Now he feels the guilt Of what he has done Prays as he rides in the back of the ambulance With the last person he wanted to hurt in this world He closed his eyes and said, "Dear lord. Forgive me for what I have done. Don't let my wife die. For I will know not what to do." He prayed until they arrived She is rushed back After a couple hours he suffers from the lack Of sleep But finally he finds out she lives And his tears of joy fall down his cheek For the woman he loves as lived And he vows to never cheat again Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such conflict in the heart when love is unfaithful...all too true to be a dream. ThisDiamond |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
This is really good, I hope it wasn't about you because that is sad. Thank you for sharing and you have a beautiful heart and we all love you. Andrea Kruckenberg |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - this is a very sad write, but very good in its intent... BC |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Man, I wouldn't want to be that guy. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Julie, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I think sometimes one must actually feel the reality of ones sorrows after one cheats in order to reach out to ones heart with true compassionate love! (wipes tears) This is touching, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some people need to be shocked into realization...James |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
A very sad picture  very touching |
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