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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-09-14 10:22 PM


Tears fall down a young womans cheek
She thought her guy was so meek
But on day she walked in on him
And her best friend
Doing something she never wanted to see
Her man was cheating

She ran out of the house
Her tears blinding her sight
She rubs her eyes with all her might
And runs out in the street

A car hits her
She lies in the street
Her man holding her close
Now he feels the guilt
Of what he has done

Prays as he rides in the back of the ambulance
With the last person he wanted to hurt in this world
He closed his eyes and said,
"Dear lord. Forgive me for what I have done.
Don't let my wife die.
For I will know not what to do."
He prayed until they arrived

She is rushed back
After a couple hours he suffers from the lack
Of sleep

But finally he finds out she lives
And his tears of joy fall down his cheek
For the woman he loves as lived
And he vows to never cheat again

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-09-14 10:30 PM


Such conflict in the heart when love is unfaithful...all too true to be a dream.
ThisDiamond

TradingSpaces19
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since 2002-08-31
Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado
2 posted 2002-09-14 10:31 PM


This is really good, I hope it wasn't about you because that is sad. Thank you for sharing and you have a beautiful heart and we all love you.

Andrea Kruckenberg

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-09-14 10:37 PM


the_loner_23 - this is a very sad write, but very good in its intent...

BC

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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Canada
4 posted 2002-09-14 11:31 PM


Man, I wouldn't want to be that guy.

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Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-15 08:47 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Julie, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I think sometimes one must actually feel the reality of ones sorrows after one cheats in order to reach out to ones heart with true compassionate love! (wipes tears) This is touching, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-09-15 11:13 PM


Some people need to be shocked into realization...James
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Guelph, Ont. Canada
7 posted 2002-09-15 11:54 PM


A very sad picture
very touching

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