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Transparent Self
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Transparent Self |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Immersing myself deeply into my Self revealed the transparency of ME. And that set me free. Free to BE. Free to be outside of ME, and more into YOU. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A unique and captivating style. ThisDiamond |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
You did a good job on this poem, it is awesome I hope to read more from you soon. Andrea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this form Kacy! Much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanking each of you, for taking time to read this. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Midnitesun - I like your words to look inside to see what one may see... BC |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I love the play of words in this piece. Very nicely done.  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Transparency...now that's scary. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Midnitesun...Enjoyed. To look inside ones self into our heart and mind is a journey we all should take from time to time...Paul |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that is pure trust and I wish that for all those in love. Kacey I adored this, simple and beautiful gal. The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Had to come back to comment. Read it - Ran away. A nice write on something that I have found to be somewhat difficult. Making myself transparent has always been an invite to pain. But, it was sweet each time. Thanks Kacy, ~wranx |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh you can get yuh wit write in here |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling here at those who fear transparency. And understanding it too, since it really is scary to look deep within, and I never wanted to do it either. But honestly? Sometimes that's the only way you can release the bad stuff you've carried around inside for years and make room for the really good things that you deserve. And to me, Love itself involves being able to connect with the depths of another's heart and mind, even when it's scary. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."Free to be outside of me"... Speaks volumes!---on many levels! ~ smiles ~ Linda |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, seems to me you've found Reality, me friend... Life is now yours to live. jwesley |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
EA, thanks! JWesley, so happy to have you back in here. Thank you. It has taken many sessions of 'comtemplating my navel' to get to this point. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I well understand Navel Comtemplation Midnitesun - only I do it from the "backside" more often than not! jimmy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Kacy, I love the puns used in this, this is clever and ties in directly into YOU like a knot from he powers that BE, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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