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pure_innocence
Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 80
Colorado, US

0 posted 2002-09-11 01:20 AM

It's been quite some time since my last post but lets hope I've grown at little and perhaps have gotten better. . .if not as a write at least as a person. This one just came to me a few minutes ago - I hope you enjoy.

Tomorrow you’ll go back,
You’ll leave me here alone,
Tomorrow you’ll be leaving,
Back to talking on the phone,

Tomorrow I won’t cry,
When you turn to go,
Tomorrow you’ll see me smile,
Through the tears I’ll never show,

Tomorrow I’ll begin,
To help this heart to heal,
Tomorrow we will end,
Cause I need a love that’s real,

Tomorrow I won’t know the words,
When you ask me why,
Tomorrow I’ll just fade away,
Cause I can’t live a lie,

Tomorrow the sun will rise,
Just as it did today,
Tomorrow I will live again,
Tomorrow I’ll be okay.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2002-09-11 01:47 AM

Very interesting and moving write! I love the positive note that it ends with. Very optomistic.

Great job!

Kris

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-09-15 07:23 AM

quote:
It's been quite some time since my last post but lets hope I've grown at little and perhaps have gotten better. . .if not as a write at least as a person. This one just came to me a few minutes ago - I hope you enjoy.

As a write, and as a person,
the growth is seen.
Well done, and welcome back...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-09-15 02:56 PM

Awesome poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-09-15 03:53 PM

I just hope tomorrow becomes today....for you

thank you for sharing
M

TradingSpaces19
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado

5 posted 2002-09-15 04:34 PM

good poem thanx for sharing.

andrea

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-09-15 07:16 PM

Yes, keep that thought, "Tomorrow the sun will rise".

Very poignant write.

Earth Angel

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-15 08:24 PM

(smiles) Yes, tomorrow everything will be OK as He has a plan for all of us and joy will flood your heart! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, I'm so happy you're back, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jaime, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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