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Open Poetry #22

Tropical storm (senyru)

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2002-09-13 02:17 PM

Tropical storm lurks
Building up to a hurricane
Stalks along the gulf shore

paladin

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-13 02:20 PM

I know. I am getting rain from it. Good poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-09-13 02:23 PM

palmettos jingle
belly-dancing dearly
to coastal thunder

(sigh) Oh my gosh, I just love the wonderful senryus you write, this is wonderful, this had me longing to be near the ocean where I dream of living in the future, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

3 posted 2002-09-13 02:30 PM

Thanks for the comment Noah.I find it hard to think of this storm in a poetic way.I live on a sail boat and am adding on some extra dock lines.

paladin

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2002-09-13 03:16 PM

Batten down the hatches
There's a wild wind blowin'
And it's reaching all the way to NE

Hang on tight ... Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2002-09-13 03:59 PM

Maybe you should head inland? I like the senryu.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-09-15 01:00 AM

it wasn't so bad, thank God. I had to work out in it!

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

7 posted 2002-09-15 01:24 AM

paladin...I'm glad the storm has passed.
Hopefully no lives will be lost...Paul

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