Open Poetry #22 |
The Stars, The Sea and Shamrocks |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
From somewhere deep inside of me, beyond celestial gravity A pull so strong to turn outside of every feeling that I hide And in your hands these petals fall the essence of me one and all Forever blooms in tender trill, the best of me as love I will From sorrow's arms to wipe away the snow uncovered where I lay To comfort of the cold long night I find your arms to hold me tight And finally to still my tears and calm my breath and soothe my fears Forever fire in kind attend, the best of me this love I send From once a stranger found by fate, beyond a friend in captivate A pull so strong to tear my soul and sewn your own to make me whole And if I could reach far enough through spaces wide and waters rough Forever blooms to shower on the man I shine my love upon From near to far in each night star a prayer to hold you as you are To keep you well and hold you tight, the arms around both day and night And finally to smile again, a chance beside each now and then Forever fire, forever sea in love so green found luckily Copyright Kkh 9/12/02 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (09-13-2002 04:54 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
What very nice sentiments, and so well put. Good one. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Blessed is he who is worthy of such words of love.--TRULY!! ..."From once a stranger found by fate..." --Destiny---and this is destined to be a keeper by many. Simply put, "I loved this!" Earth Angel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is wonderful; I enjoyed it so much and it's a keeper. Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your heart forever be filled with four-leafed clovers of loves blessings forever and ever and may his smile be that special pot on the other end of the rainbow! This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
My, this is surely a keeper...I knew you could write, write awesomely, write love, passion, so many different feels...But, I never knew you could write of love as well as you have here... May he never forget these written words of one's beautiful heart... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Awesome write, perfect metre perfect form, your subject has its own charm. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond This is a diamond, well polished and set. Excellent write. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
again, such lovely thoughts...gorgeous!! |
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