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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-09-13 12:30 PM



From somewhere deep inside of me, beyond celestial gravity
A pull so strong to turn outside of every feeling that I hide
And in your hands these petals fall the essence of me one and all
Forever blooms in tender trill, the best of me as love I will

From sorrow's arms to wipe away the snow uncovered where I lay
To comfort of the cold long night I find your arms to hold me tight
And finally to still my tears and calm my breath and soothe my fears
Forever fire in kind attend, the best of me this love I send

From once a stranger found by fate, beyond a friend in captivate
A pull so strong to tear my soul and sewn your own to make me whole
And if I could reach far enough through spaces wide and waters rough
Forever blooms to shower on the man I shine my love upon

From near to far in each night star a prayer to hold you as you are
To keep you well and hold you tight, the arms around both day and night
And finally to smile again, a chance beside each now and then
Forever fire, forever sea in love so green found luckily

Copyright Kkh 9/12/02

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (09-13-2002 04:54 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2002-09-13 12:34 PM


Beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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2 posted 2002-09-13 12:44 PM


What very nice sentiments, and so well put. Good one.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-13 12:46 PM


Blessed is he who is worthy of such words of love.--TRULY!!

..."From once a stranger found by fate..."
--Destiny---and this is destined to be a keeper by many.

Simply put, "I loved this!"

Earth Angel


NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-09-13 12:55 PM


This is wonderful; I enjoyed it so much and it's a keeper.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-13 02:07 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your heart forever be filled with four-leafed clovers of loves blessings forever and ever and may his smile be that special pot on the other end of the rainbow! This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-09-13 04:05 PM


My,  this is surely a keeper...I knew you
could write, write awesomely,  write love,
passion,  so many different feels...But,
I never knew you could write of love as well
as you have here...  May he never forget
these written words of one's beautiful
heart...

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
7 posted 2002-09-13 06:29 PM


Awesome write, perfect metre perfect form, your subject has its own charm.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2002-09-13 07:30 PM


ThisDiamond
This is a diamond, well polished and set.
Excellent write.

muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
9 posted 2004-03-17 08:27 PM


again, such lovely thoughts...gorgeous!!
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