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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-09-12 07:46 AM


How to Paint

Sink into the thing you see
Till it becomes a part of thee
Then search the length and breath of it
It’s inner core its sense of fit.

Breathe it’s very dense of breath
Feel its awe and sense of death
Blend into its ring and chime
How it deals its part in time.

Grow with it till full in grace
Take its stand in common place.
Nourish on the inner glow
Reap the essence you must know.

Live with it a one on one
Stay with it till you are done.
Then you take a brush in faint and
Paint and paint and paint and paint

Till you reach its spirits goal
Then you have painted its soul.



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1 posted 2002-09-12 07:57 AM


i stand in awe of you...i love how you write...helen
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2 posted 2002-09-12 08:07 AM


"Live with it a one on one
Stay with it till you are done.
Then you take a brush in faint and
Paint and paint and paint and paint

Till you reach its spirits goal
Then you have painted its soul."




(smiles) Oh Seymour, I just love how you paint words, this is beautiful, may we all become accustomed to what makes us happy and paint ourselves and render us in the colors! (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

anya
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3 posted 2002-09-12 08:15 AM


You have captured a feeling here really well, so eloquently put!
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4 posted 2002-09-12 08:29 AM



This poem is a piece of art--- and a wonderful extension of your soul!

Earth Angel

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5 posted 2002-09-12 08:54 AM


I usually just hire someone...and I've never seen them go to these extremes however. I think I'll just get vinyl siding this time around though.....Sy, you are truly a wise old fart with a mind that's "way out there" somewhere.....
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6 posted 2002-09-12 08:56 AM



...and upon the canvas you speak of,
you bring love to life, and life to love...

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7 posted 2002-09-12 09:12 AM


What a beautiful and refreshing morning write love.
~Special hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2002-09-12 10:29 AM


Seymour~

'Live with it a one on one
Stay with it till you are done.
Then you take a brush in faint and
Paint and paint and paint and paint'


I tried that ... I ran out of numbers !

You not only 'paint' ... you've perfected word-art~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~


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9 posted 2002-09-12 10:35 AM


Sy

Oh, how I would love to be able to do this!  It must feel incredibly good.


Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-09-12 11:27 AM


Helen,
Thank you sweet.

Noah,
And thank you my friend.

Anya,
Eloquent, how nice.

Earth Angel,
Very kind thank you.

Toe,
As one old fart to another, I used vinyl on my house. LOL I see you are feeling better.

Sunshine,


Enchantress,
Special hugs back.

Marge,
Love and hugs back,

Martie,
You do it with your poetry.

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11 posted 2002-09-12 12:27 PM


It is easy when the canvas is life.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2002-09-12 12:41 PM


Moonlight Romeo
It is really harder. LOL

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13 posted 2002-09-12 04:30 PM


"Till you reach its spirits goal
Then you have painted its soul."

Ah my friend but I have seen your work, and it is hard tell whose soul was painted, as I see a part of yours in my scribblings   

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon    

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2002-09-12 05:12 PM


Sharon,
Very true dear you have a good point, thank you for the read.

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