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The Gift
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The Gift |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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The Gift he took the blackness of the night chipped and cut and edged and carved in the darkness with his grace perfection when done he lifted my face to see his gift there in the velvet sky I became breathless as he gave me the moon |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Helen, I wonder what we could do with such a gift....lie on the ground, looking up... and dreaming... Love your words...always so soft and in tune... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, it truly is a gift to share something so special with one you love, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
HELEN! He carved the moon? Oh girl...this one is exceptional! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awwww.....Helen. What a fabulous gift! Where did you find such a man? Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Helen, A lovely write, enjoyed the read. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The gift is a glorius one! You captured it's truth very well. Deb |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - I love the moon... BC |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - I love the moon. Soft your pen today... BC |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, romantic and soothing Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
SL~ You have penned heart words of discovery that make me sigh... Indigo |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This is enchanting, Helen. Smooooooothe |
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