Open Poetry #22 |
All I Need |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
As we sit by the fire sharing brandy just us two I peer through the glass to look in love at you. I see your face clearly through the glass in my hand then I watch as you slowly put down your glass and stand. As you shed your clothes your hard body all I see there through the glass I see desire for only me, so I too slip quietly out of my dress just then you wrap your arms around me and we make love again, again and again by the heat of the fire oh love this is all I need all I ever will desire. WhiteRose [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-14-2002 10:37 AM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Not sure why you needed a fire except for the rhyme this certainly is rather hot already. Good poem Gloom |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Wow, I'm panting...so this is what these forums are about. J/K Very nice visuals. |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Wow, I'm panting...so this is what these forums are about. J/K Very nice visuals. |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Wow, I'm panting...so this is what these forums are about. J/K Very nice visuals. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
WhiteRose, I think that you made Magician a bit...Jumpy Nice thoughts penned nicely. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Anne, this is beautiful, I love it, your words always spark such passiona nd beauty, I love it, may your heart always gets all it needs and deserves with joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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