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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-09-11 11:43 PM

I long for October
For the leaves
To change colour from
Green
to
red
And even to
Yellow
I just love to
Rake all the leaves
In one massive pile
And jump right in
To see them
s
            c
                     a
t
              t
   e
          r
All over the ground...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-11-2002 11:48 PM).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-09-11 11:56 PM

Thanks for the lightnin'. I love the fall and especially October...cause then it's my birthday and I really love my birthday!!!! And the leaves are great then, I just like walking through 'em and kicking.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-09-11 11:57 PM

this is cute, thanks for the lightening up

I needed it

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-09-11 11:57 PM

Yay! Oh my gosh, I love this, you indeed brought a smile to my face, I needed that, I just love the creative form here, God Bless You tonight, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

geenabee
Member

since 2002-09-10

Posts 59
NC--USA

4 posted 2002-09-12 02:01 AM

Purty~~!!

VERY purty.

hello from Geenacountry where the leaves are green and the Gustav bellows

Thanks for the levity.

GB

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2002-09-12 08:32 AM

This scattering was needed, methinks

~Ed

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

6 posted 2002-09-12 08:59 AM

A lovely presentation and very much needed levity. Enjoyed.

Speak to me in whispers,
I'll listen with my heart.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2002-09-12 09:02 AM

This is, most assuredly, a piece of art! I simply love it! Thank you for brightening my day with this ray of sunshine!

Earth Angel

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-09-12 09:48 AM

Kristen~
A lovely, lovely presentation of thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2002-09-13 05:14 PM

This one gave me a smile.

Thank you!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-09-13 05:21 PM

Ya did it! Lightened it right up...and
before you know it...we will all be
jumping in the pile of leaves....

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

11 posted 2002-09-13 06:21 PM

you could make me fall for fall with your pretty poem
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

TradingSpaces19
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado

12 posted 2002-09-13 06:44 PM

Dear Kristen,

Thank you for sharing this poem, it was great and it made me smile, it was so creative, thank you again.

Andrea Kruckenberg

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