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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-09-11 11:43 PM


I long for October
For the leaves
To change colour from
Green
to
red
And even to
Yellow
I just love to
Rake all the leaves
In one massive pile
And jump right in
To see them
s
            c
                     a
t
              t
   e
          r
All over the ground...



If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-11-2002 11:48 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-09-11 11:56 PM


Thanks for the lightnin'.  I love the fall and especially October...cause then it's my birthday and I really love my birthday!!!!  And the leaves are great then, I just like walking through 'em and kicking.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-09-11 11:57 PM


this is cute, thanks for the lightening up

I needed it

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-11 11:57 PM




Yay! Oh my gosh, I love this, you indeed brought a smile to my face, I needed that, I just love the creative form here, God Bless You tonight, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

geenabee
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4 posted 2002-09-12 02:01 AM


Purty~~!!
VERY purty.

hello from Geenacountry where the leaves are green and the Gustav bellows

Thanks for the levity.

GB

wranx
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5 posted 2002-09-12 08:32 AM


This scattering was needed, methinks

~Ed

WhiteRose
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6 posted 2002-09-12 08:59 AM


A lovely presentation and very much needed levity. Enjoyed.

Speak to me in whispers,
I'll listen with my heart.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-09-12 09:02 AM



This is, most assuredly, a piece of art! I simply love it! Thank you for brightening my day with this ray of sunshine!

Earth Angel

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8 posted 2002-09-12 09:48 AM


Kristen~
A lovely, lovely presentation of thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2002-09-13 05:14 PM


This one gave me a smile. Thank you!
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10 posted 2002-09-13 05:21 PM


Ya did it!  Lightened it right up...and
before you know it...we will all be
jumping in the pile of leaves....

Kethry
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11 posted 2002-09-13 06:21 PM


you could make me fall for fall with your pretty poem
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



TradingSpaces19
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12 posted 2002-09-13 06:44 PM


Dear Kristen,

Thank you for sharing this poem, it was great and it made me smile, it was so creative, thank you again.

Andrea Kruckenberg

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