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Which Is You?
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Which Is You? |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Which Is You? Sitting right in front of me is a face I once knew and loved It's you... I see the memories as I see you now Which is real? You, the one whose eyes I can't make out their expression, Or me in living illusion? You are near, yet far... Am I reaching out my hand To touch you in flesh Or the soul-in-memory? Which, you tell me that you wish me to hold... You're broken into two pieces I wish I knew where I stand as you look at me now I'll choose the piece that's meant for me Is it that you've forgotten me Or that you've stopped remembering Whichever... I just want to feel real I don't know about you But in case you're wondering It's still me [This message has been edited by mycafe (09-12-2002 10:56 AM).] |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
enjoyed this very much, there were some really good lines, 'Is it thatyou've forgotten me or that you've just stopped remembering', I think that was a very clever way to put it, anyway thanks for the read, anya [This message has been edited by anya (09-12-2002 08:13 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Marie, I understand this feeling so very much, though it still hurts stopped being remembered, it hurts even more to me being forgotten and there I wish for your smile in your heart to always shine with love! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'll choose the piece that's meant for me I really enjoyed this, and that line most of all. It's hard to fit the pieces together, save the one for you/him/her/she/he/us. Lovely writing mycafe~~~ |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
a lovely write. thanx for sharing. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marie I felt the pain and longing in this and I only hope it wasn't written from personal experience. I wish you well and hope things are fine. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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