Open Poetry #22 |
Let Me |
BldWhtRose Junior Member
since 2001-09-24
Posts 38Alabama USA |
Be very still, that’s it don’t move Let me smell your hair Let me walk around you now I know this isn’t fair Let me hold you Let me taste Let me kiss you now Let me do just what I wish And all my dreams, allow |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
It's so nice to meet you BldWhtRose. Your poetry is beautiful. Please forgive me if I don't comment on all your work just now. Sleep truly calls to me. I've read several of your poems and love the simplistic beauty of each and every one. The White Rose~ |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
cooool??? I love that... I understand you dear, when anyone fallen in love he or she should have this feelings ,,,,Great thought??` Hugesss Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Nicely writ in such a short verse. Painted a pic for me thanks for sharing. God Bless! Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Creepy!!! Something everyone should read and understand, Blood White Rose. Mikey |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
this is a good poem thanx for sharing. Andrea |
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