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BldWhtRose
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since 2001-09-24
Posts 38
Alabama USA

0 posted 2002-09-04 12:55 PM



Be very still, that’s it don’t move
Let me smell your hair
Let me walk around you now
I know this isn’t fair
Let me hold you
Let me taste
Let me kiss you now
Let me do just what I wish
And all my dreams, allow

© Copyright 2002 Jonnie Jo Lee ~ BldWhtRose - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-09-04 01:03 AM


It's so nice to meet you BldWhtRose. Your poetry is beautiful. Please forgive me if I don't comment on all your work just now. Sleep truly calls to me. I've read several of your poems and love the simplistic beauty of each and every one.

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

secretlife
Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,
2 posted 2002-09-04 02:38 AM


cooool??? I love that... I understand you dear, when anyone fallen in love he or she should have this feelings ,,,,Great thought??`

Hugesss
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Rodney Belcher
Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan
3 posted 2002-09-05 11:26 AM


Nicely writ in such a short verse. Painted a pic for me thanks for sharing. God Bless!

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-09-05 11:54 AM


Creepy!!! Something everyone should read and understand, Blood White Rose.

Mikey

TradingSpaces19
Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado
5 posted 2002-09-13 06:37 PM


this is a good poem thanx for sharing.

Andrea

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