Open Poetry #22 |
One Love, Two Hearts In Remember (Duet with SueTang) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Do you remember the old times In the days when love was grand A time when love was innocent As two hearts took command I remember those golden times upon the sands of whitest grain of moments when we two shared rhymes in quiet repose and sweet refrain Do you remember your first love When your heart felt on fire How he gave your life new meaning Sensing your want and desire Yes my love, I shall not forget the moments tenderly shared then The peace and warmth without a fret when two were one, in thick or thin. Do you remember your first kiss When the fireworks lit the sky Love flowed through your veins And gave you wings to fly A kiss that left the earth on wings of angels flying in soft soar A kiss that melted, never stings A kiss of want, yet but once more Do you remember those nights Walking barefoot along the sand A silhouette of two lovers As they walked hand in hand Tickling toes and sailing the breeze with whispers telling the night to still. As branches bow the giant trees in wait of once, of when we will... I still remember the words That you whispered so true My life is filled with love And my days spent loving you One love, one heart, one soul in wait of just a time for two in love. One love, one heart, one night so late beneath the moon, the stars above... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue & Magnus...A really great job both of you have done...Paul One to ask...one to answer...both together in harmony.Do You Remember. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Magnus and Sue Loved the queston answer format....beautiful and tender memories... enjoyed this very much! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue and Barry, I have to agree I love the question and answer format of this piece. Very beautifully penned.... ~Hugs to you both~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Paul, Martie, Nancy...thanx to all of you for your replies...HUGS to you ladies....and a handshake for Paul..... I managed to catch Sue on the way out the door in time to get her approval of this.. She told me that her part was a DRAFT of a poem she was writing.. Seems to me it was more than just a draft... I think it was perfect to write to.... SueT...thanx, and don't let anyone ever think you don't have the talent to write a collaboration...You're wrong!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It was as if this lovely poem was written by, "one heart, one soul". Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Earth Angel |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh lovely work you two. I also loved the question, answer format. Very well done |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Linda, thanx bunches...I am sure Sue will have a few remarks once she is back home.. Well Girl? Whatcha waitin' for? Even this old man can walk at a pace that you can hop on the train..... So....all aboard!!! Join the dooooetttty committeeeeee...... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my but this is lovely. Congrats you two. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Absolutely wonderful collaboration here. Enjoyed very much. ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You most certainly pick wonderful poets to duet with... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, thank you so much for the invitation, but I wouldn't want to detract from the wonderfully romantic verses that you would write! You already have two run-away hits from your successful collaborations with Sue and our Rose of White---I'd break your winning streak! Earth Angel |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Romantic Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow! What can I say? Barry - Firstly, I was so humbled that you would even consider me to assist you with a duet and it is the first one I have ever done. I am amazed at all the wonderful responses and how well received our words have been. I have such a deep respect for you and your wonderful words and I am delighted to share the stage with the kindest of hearts and the warmest of souls. Thank you all for reading this as I take my hat off to Mr. Romance, Barry. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
two poets of romance write wonderfully - this is really good and I enjoyed it so - thanks for teaming on this - Paul |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Romance oozing off the pages of blue. This is just stunning. Bravo to both of you. Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue and Barry, you two write so well together, this is one beaurtiful classic written with two golden hearts, I LOVE IT, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Sue and Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sybil Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 73Midwest |
A beautiful duet. It appears one must know another very well in order to blend words so effortlessly. Thank you for this. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sybil, thank you for your kindness....Knowing your style...I am sure that you are quite capable of collaborating as well...Perhaps soon we can do this.... |
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