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If There be Sin
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If There be Sin |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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If there be Sin The wish to die I understand If misery has marked its brand But taking life is no ones right And I for one abhor the sight. I see limiting an overgrowth With equal consent of both This world can hold so many souls Beyond that goal is horrors toll I see a pain beyond relief I see its death a grace belief, And there are many, many more But that is kindness and no more. Our death is inevitable One that is unpardonable. All things that come must surely go And this I think we all do know. But wasting life does not fit in It is our worst and greatest sin. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Life is indeed precious. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T---I couldn't agree with you more! Earth Angel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you all for the read and comment. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, yes, all things must pass, but until their time, we all must live life to the fullest, and to take ones live or try and change it is a sin! (big hugggsssss) This is powerfl, sweet friend, I join you in your thoughts and sympathies, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton (God Bless America) "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sincerely so. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very humbling truth here my friend.... Yes, an unpardonable sin....surely it is.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, I thank you for pulling this out of the depths. And I enjoyed your reply. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
But wasting life does not fit in It is our worst and greatest sin. Seymour - your writings are rare and wonderful. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Thank you for the read, Magnus, And thank you my friend. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Your words ring true in my heart. To waste a life is unpardonable, because it is such a wonderful gift...Paul |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Man's inhumanity to man has always been our greatest sin....well said, Sy!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you for the read and nice comment. Paul, I thank you too for your time and read. Balladeer, It seems we agree. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So many ways to waste a life... so many ways... thank you, Sy... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
yes......  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie,  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks for this, Sy. Very true words. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Thank you for the read and reply. |
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