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Whole Lotta Shakin' Goin' On (Tribute to Elvis Presley)
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Whole Lotta Shakin' Goin' On (Tribute to Elvis Presley) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Though I never got to grow up during the era Elvis was king, I consider myself a true fan of him and admire his music and cinema and all he gave youth in America and the world throughout the good ole' times!  Long live the King, Yay! ) “ ‘Til we meet you again, may God bless you. Adios.” -Said in 1977 at the end of a concert during his last tour. - Elvis Presley Long Live The King By: Noah Eaton 8/16/02 Standing on Beale Street Wailing with the Graceland Dixies Wearing his hair long Absorbing the rock and black blues A Big Hunk O' Love is singing on like a hound dog Long live the King Strutting along in his white two-piece suit Standing in the spotlight singing "If I Can Dream" More than just a little swinging guitar man You wore the motorcycle spirit of James Dean and Marlon Brando Collected a Convair 880, flew to become the king of rock n' roll Bought yourself a guitar instead of a bicycle back in your hometown Tupelo Learned how to play, took your 1939 Plymouth to Graceland to sing out your soul Rock steady Roll gently Whole lotta shakin' goin' on So get ready Standing on Beale Street Wailing with the Graceland Dixies Wearing his hair long Absorbing the rock and black blues A Big Hunk O' Love is singing on like a hound dog Long live the King Strutting along in his white two-piece suit Standing in the spotlight singing "If I Can Dream" More than just a little swinging guitar man Long Live The King You brought along the sun to Sun Studios Rode the Louisiana Hayride and signed on with the Colonel Went to RCA, got your pesto down in vinyl Taking it from Heartbreak Hotel to the Milton Berle show Johnny B. Good, Slip on your blue suede shoes Welcome to his world Just don't be crushed by his steamroller blues Standing on Beale Street Wailing with the Graceland Dixies Wearing his hair long Absorbing the rock and black blues A Big Hunk O' Love is singing on like a hound dog Long live the King Strutting along in his white two-piece suit Standing in the spotlight singing "If I Can Dream" More than just a little swinging guitar man Long Live The King I remember you singing on the Steve Allen show Singing tongue-and-cheek with that Basset hound I remember the controversy you sparked with Ed Sullivan And he was there to keep you from being thrown in the pound I recall Jailhouse Rock and Blue Hawaii King Creole, your G.I haircut, girls girls, girls and gospel blends You certainly did more than just live a little, love a little Rock on, Elvis is here to stay as king so move over Eminem Standing on Beale Street Wailing with the Graceland Dixies Wearing his hair long Absorbing the rock and black blues A Big Hunk O' Love is singing on like a hound dog Long live the King Strutting along in his white two-piece suit Standing in the spotlight singing "If I Can Dream" More than just a little swinging guitar man Long Live The King Standing on Beale Street Holding a candle to my hand Still hearing the dixies And his rock and backyard blues This Big Hunk O'Love still sings on in Graceland Thank you, thank you very much! "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-16-2002 06:53 PM).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I enjoyed Elvis and his movies, but I'm so glad you used a little "k" in the word king. For a long time, I've wished people would just let him rest in peace and I wish there weren't people raking in millions at keeping him alive. If they were giving it all to charity, that would be a bit different, but they're not, to my knowledge. From your poetry, I believe you are a believer in the real King and I know it is good to appreciate the talent God bestows on His children. He gives us the chance to use our talent for Him or agin Him. One thing that's sad, Elvis has no say now in how his talent is used, anymore. Your poem is well done, I've no doubt, and it's great you express yourself so well. This is not a statement against your admiration of a very talented man. It's just my statement on behalf of a person's memory and legacy. I started a poem about my feelings regarding all the 'publicity' currently going on that rakes in the dough for a few. So far, I'm not brave enough to post it. See what a great person you are...you are brave enough to state your convictions. Yep, now I've taken time to come back and read your poem, Noah, and you know more about Elvis, in a lot of ways than I do, and I grew up during the beginning and the height of his career, which was most of it, huh. Good job! I could almost hear the music that surely goes along with this piece you created. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (08-17-2002 01:07 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Noah! My way cool sidekick! This is one fantastic tribute to Elvis! For one as young as yourself who didn't grow up in that era..(my era),  you sure did great research on this one Noah to come up with so many statistics! I commend you on your wonderful write. ~Hugs sweetie~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks for this Noah, I loved Elvis and I still remember where I was the moment I heard he died. A sad waste, to go so young. You have a great way with these tributes. I remember your Jams Dean poem, too. You should have had some time in the 50's and 60's!! Hugs Sandra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'... This Big Hunk O'Love still sings on in Graceland Thank you, thank you very much! ...' Big Hunk of Burnin' Love.... Gosh, I don't know where the last 25 years have gone. How could Elvis be dead this many years -- I'm sure it was just yesterday that he died. You did a great writing job and I'm sorry you didn't grow up in this era. Seems they were the simplier times...but maybe not! Miss you ... Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - what a great tribune to Elvis. I sang a few of his songs back in the days when I played with my band. I still love his music, it will never grow old... BC |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
  Noah, I'm so glad that someone took the time to do the deed here today, and wouldn't you know it, you weren't even born when the Dude left us.... Someone should put THIS to music... your research was great, too.  Sheila  Create something infinite today - Smile!!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He had a gift... and it was gone from us too soon. Thank you, Noah! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sweet!! OMG Noah you do his memory justice!! now I wish we could talk! Blah I do not have msn..but again amazing as always!!!  Love, Kristen |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I remember Elvis well. I never cared for his movies, but did enjoy his music. Nice work, Noah. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good show Noah! Nice tribute....He was magic! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Noah~ So glad to see your thoughts about the King... could feel the thoughts and dreams of a talent blessed man. Thanks for the view. Indigo |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Actually, I've heard a lot about Elvis form TV shows and the like. Ur song of tribute to the king is very lyrical anf replete in it's rythym. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The Lord is our King, but Elvis is certainly our king of Rock and Roll....and yes, I agree with VAS, too bad they don't take all the monies gained from keeping Elvis alive....and putting them to a good use where he would be remembered for more than just the music and feel that he has given us all... Thanx Noah... |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
Noah~ You are truly a good poet, thank you for sharing these peoms with everyone. You responded to my poem "Why?", and I have 2 other poems, "Mountain Dew", and "The First Time". I really like your poems, and you are so talented. Thank you. Love, Andrea P.S. I always write Love on my letters. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Sadly Elvis has left this life but he will always live in our hearts.Thank yuh Elvis,Thank yuh very much. paladin |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is awesome Noah. Long live Elvis Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, That was before my time. His movie about the worlds fair filmed in Washington state had a scene that went right by where I lived. Oh that's right, he was before my time. My mistake!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good one Noah...James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Though Elvis was way before my time, I have seen him on TV and my good friend Balladeer was friends with his grandfather and has told me all about him.....When Jerry Lee Lewis sang "Whole Lotta Shakin' Goin' on" Balladeer was dating his own second cousin the same as Jerry Lee was dating his own first cousin-soon to be wife. This is an extraordinary work Noah... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BRAVO! ENCORE! You're just "A Teddy Bear." Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, Wonderful tribute, of course I'm too young to rememeber Elvis  Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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