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The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

0 posted 2002-09-12 04:36 PM

--- With a Little Kiss ---

As you stood there at my door
You knew what I did not.

If I had known that look at you
Would be the last I got,

I'd have looked into your eyes
I'd have looked into their shine

I'd have pulled you close to me
And kissed you one more time.

If I had known that you were walking
From my life that day,

I'd have known it was the time
To try to make you stay

But with a smile and a little kiss
You turned and walked away

You took the last bit of my heart
When you walked away that day

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

[This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (09-13-2002 07:50 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-09-12 04:44 PM

Oh dang! Just reach right in there and pull my heart right out why don't ya!
This is SO good!
Enjoyed...very much!

~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-12 04:45 PM

Enjoyed

Cold hands means a warm heart

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

3 posted 2002-09-12 06:35 PM

So well spoken!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-09-12 09:09 PM

Was she nuts?!?!?!?

Earth Angel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-12 09:14 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Gerald, this is so powerfully sentimental, sweet friend, it is sad but so beautiful, may these memories of love always be with you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gerald, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-12-2002 09:14 PM).]

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

6 posted 2002-09-12 09:17 PM

definately pulls at the heart strings. Very well done.

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

7 posted 2002-09-13 10:03 AM

Enchantress,
   When people read my scribblings and tell me that they are okay, it makes me feel like I got SOMETHING from the hurt. Thanks

loner, EarthenSoul,
   I appreciate the read, I shall go out of my way to reciprocate. Thanks

EarthAngel,
   We all have our reasons for what we do. I DO thank her soo much for the moment in time though.

Mistletoe Angel,
   Thank you for your heartfelt and caring reply. I know I am no different from anyone else ... we all have hurt. But it's nice to know we don't hurt alone.  Thanks(big hugggsssssss backatcha)

WhiteRose,
   I've been away a bit ... thanks for the kind words..... I can't wait to see what you have written that I have missed. Thanks

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

[This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (09-13-2002 10:04 AM).]

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