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Miss T. Eyed
Junior Member

since 2002-05-26

Posts 47

0 posted 2002-09-10 11:19 AM

Hear Me Whisper

See my lost face,
a lonely reflection,
sadly responding,
to your distant trace.

Dry my past tears,
jointly in harmony,
we will slowly climb,
our castle of fears.

Touch my warm hand,
Softly, measure my tide,
as our feet trickle
through memories sand.

Hear me whisper,
silently, tasting your name,
towards a vacant shell,
you love me, Mister.

Feel my stitched heart,
beat in rhythmic desire,
A remnant of us,
right from our very start.

Caress my soul,
kindly sail me away,
cast me your favor,
I will sway our toll.

Touch my warm hand,
Softly, measure my tide
as our feet trickle
through memories sand.

Hear me whisper,
silently, tasting your name
towards a vacant shell,
you love me, Mister.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-10 04:20 PM

This is so romantic. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-09-15 07:25 AM

Very sad...but I heard the whisper.

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-09-15 09:18 AM

Feel my stitched heart,
beat in rhythmic desire,
A remnant of us,
right from our very start.

this verse, especially, touched me...
*s
M

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-09-15 09:24 AM

A lonely soft whisper...
and yes, I hear it also.
Well said.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Miss T. Eyed
Junior Member

since 2002-05-26

Posts 47

5 posted 2002-09-17 11:22 PM

Thank-you all for your kind responses, I truely appreciate. This poem was kind of about a friend of mine. Glad you enjoyed.

SouthernWinds
Junior Member

since 2002-08-23

Posts 12
Dreaming in the clouds

6 posted 2002-09-18 02:01 PM

Hey Miss T. Eyed,

This is a great poem. If I didn't know better I'd think you were writing about a dear friend of mine and I.

SouthernWinds

[This message has been edited by SouthernWinds (09-18-2002 02:02 PM).]

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