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Open Poetry #22

Loving

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

0 posted 2002-09-18 03:47 AM

To be in love
Is to be truly wonderfully alive.

But be aware that there will be stormy seas and trouble waters
Before you reach the island paradise of your dreams.

The love that can take you to places that you have never even imagined..
Be ready for Love..

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

[This message has been edited by secretlife (09-18-2002 03:49 AM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-09-18 06:45 AM

oh to be alive and in love. Wonderful optimistic poem.

In you comment you ask for constructive critiques. Let me tell you "honestly" is spelled like this not as you have put it and "please" is spelled thus

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-18 02:04 PM

Beautiful thoughts

Cold hands means a warm heart

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