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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-09-09 09:30 PM

Crestfallen Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

Cresting sliver of gilded light
falls across this indigo night
A whispering slice in the sky
this crestfallen moon
in gentle-light sigh~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-09-09 09:50 PM

Marge....you write of our moon as no other
can...or ever will......

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

2 posted 2002-09-09 09:55 PM

Girl you must have been reading my mind earlier. Ron and I were out for a walk this evening and were looking at this sliver moon. I told him you'd probably write some magnificent piece. And you did!

Hugs and loves, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-09-09 10:00 PM

Speechless

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-09-09 10:04 PM

You painted a lovely picture of the moon with your words, Marge...

~ loony chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-09-09 10:06 PM

Marge---This was so lovely, that I just pulled back my covers to see the moon! (Oh, my goodness---I meant, pulled back my "curtains" !!)---To see a moon under my covers, would give my reply a whole other meaning! hehe

Unfortunately, when I pulled back my "curtains!"---there was no moon in sight. So, the only moon I'll be seeing tonight--is yours! tehe

Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-09-2002 10:20 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-09-09 10:12 PM

LOL@EarthAngel pulling back the covers.
Beautiful write Marge.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-09-10 05:25 PM

Thanks for the smile, Marge.

Me

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-09-10 05:26 PM

enjoyed

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

9 posted 2016-09-01 12:45 PM

Even when crestfallen, our moon is beautiful....

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