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May I Kiss You?
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May I Kiss You? |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
May I kiss you?’ she asked Knowing full well the answer ‘Only forever’ I replied In blushing whisper A plea voiced tender That shall not be denied ‘May I touch you?’ she asked As fingers traced my cheek ‘Only forever’ I replied With trembling lips so meek Downward to her eyes to seek For they were opened wide ‘May I love you?’ she asked And began to pledge her plight ‘Only forever’ I replied And held her through dying light As dusk deepened to starry night Then she softly cried |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know her... and I thought of how this would be had the answer been "only once"... |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
This is beautiful work. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Dang!! This is...this is... So tender...so beautiful, so sensual.. This took my breath away... You are amazing...intriguing, and..yes. And...I feel as though I am about to start to stutter.. Therefore, I shall perhaps gently tuck this away where I keep very very special writes...such as this.  ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*sigh* so romantic... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and may forever always bring you great happiness and tenderness of true love! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
hiy dear Magician,, waaaaaaaaaaw its just perfect dear friend.. what a nice topic and thought... sooooooo nice Good Luck Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awwwwww!  beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...well done...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nicely done... Enjoyed reading this ... Regards, Sudhir |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is so tenderly written and beautiful in content. Very well done Magician somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Cool! I now know someone more sentimentally romantic than I am! Hi. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gotta send this one through again  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
third one..more lovely writing. How did I miss you? "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
quote: Very nicely constructed, and this last stanza adds the right tone of consumation...enjoyed this for all the right reasons. Lovely. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...but of course. |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
O my gosh...I'm in love with this one. Hope I'm not digging up anything you wanted left alone...but I'm new...so dig I must. This is awesome...and I don't mean in the "surfer dude" sense...lol J |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
be still my beating heart... How romantic... BlueEyes |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
An excellent write! I like the way you put your thougths together Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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