Open Poetry #22 |
Oh Beethoven |
LoveBug
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Beethoven What a man you were Independent Strong and sure Your melodies Your life was song But in this world You didn’t belong You heard the song In the wind In the trees You heard the songs In the brooks and the breeze You wrote the things That no man could You endured the pain That no man should Your great ears Began to dim And you withdrew… To the music within You found that ‘twas not what you heard But what was within that helped you endure Beethoven What a melody And what hope You give to me… Most of us go to our grave with our music still inside of us. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
LoveBug - you know him well. When I read your words I could sense it... BC |
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Elizabeth
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Well, it's about TIME you showed your face around here... Loved your poem. Some people are true inspirations. I've missed ya around here, it's great to have you back! Me God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
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WOW this is great work.....Beethoven is my favorite....I enjoyed this very much. DeaDiAmore |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome work Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Yay!!! Awwwwwww, I have missed your beautiful words so so much, I love Beethoven so much and though my heart goes out to him and the challenges he faced with hearing and his emotions, he is a remarkable man and genius of music! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erica, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Roll Over Beethoven"---the LoveBug is here! You did this so well! I truly enjoyed it! Please write more poems on classic composers----Mozart, Chaupin, Debussy, Elvis Presley (no, Noah already did the king! tee-hee!) ~ smiles ~ Earth Angel |
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LoveBug
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I appreciate all of your kind replies. I've missed you all so much... I'm just glad you haven't forgotten me! Much love, Erica Most of us go to our grave with our music still inside of us. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Erica~ First of all, we could NEVER forget you! You have been deeply missed, my friend. Secondly, this is an awesome write! It flows so smoothly and it's written as if you knew him personally. Excellent job! It's SO good to see you posting again! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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