Open Poetry #22 |
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To Our Love (O My Soul) |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever ![]() |
(read slowly to the tune of "What Wonderous Love" if you are familiar with that song. this poem made me cry.) I have found my soul today, Now I cry, Now I cry. I have found my soul today, O my soul, O my soul. I have found my soul today Shine through this cold and distant sky, In LOVERS ARMS I CRY.... O my soul, O my soul... What wonderous love is this? O my soul, O my soul, What WONDEROUS LOVE IS THIS?!? O MY SOUL O MY SOUL. Can you teach me of this life? I FEAR ONE DAY I WILL DIE... IN LOVERS ARMS I CRY.. O MY SOUL.. o, my soul... Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is good Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
unfortunately I am not as fortunate to know the song you are talking about but nonetheless your words do flow and I enjoyed..now I must go on a hunt to find this song you are talking about! Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Oh, my"---sounds like you re-discovered a part of yourself. I'm not familiar with the melody of the song you're referring to, but the way you wrote this piece, it has a soulful beat built right into it. Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-08-2002 06:20 PM).] |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
enjoyed this VERY much, sadly I do not know that song but hey I still liked this alot, flowed so well, anya |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
O darling. Your words are gorgeous, as they speak of your soul!!!!! smile. peace. O' to be delivered from the realm of the rational into pure song... |
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