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Open Poetry #22

Rainbow Dominoes

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-09-07 06:48 PM

A life that has two ends
Going in two different ways
Never ever matching at both ends
But sometimes stringing on
In a game of joining pieces

There is no black and white
In this competitive competition
No set pattern in the layout of the pieces
Just the greatest challenge within the mind

A championship of the pride within you
To joining the jungle into a thread of beauty
In all the colors of a masterpiece
Within all the textures that create vibrant depth

In the emotions that are so volatile
That the believe within soars
So high in the heavens
On the miracle combination played right
In such a exhilarated flight of success

But this game is never ending
As long as air revives the visions
Into the puzzle of clear challenges
Which have to be played
With all your abilities

D.Lester Young (08/04/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-09-07 07:10 PM

What no double blanks?
Very smooth poem.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-07 07:28 PM

Very well written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-08 05:26 PM

You have done a good job of "stringing" and "joining pieces" in this game called life.

Linda

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