Open Poetry #22 |
Relative Insignificance |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Would indeed the clouds puddle neath the prying eye of Sol set so high above that to him not even the giants with lightning are specks on the cornea to in dazed distraction watch flit across the surface Surely not ruled by Sun yet slaves to him no less they billow with angry heads throwing their own sharp spikes earthward at humans....mere mortals that would themselves not be much more to cloud than cloud is to sun Still... I would feel the drops from such passings trickle across bare skin and dance in pagan delight defying insignificance while rejoicing in being touched by both I Would that you Could find the way To touch me too |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a sensual plea! Ron, you have done it again ... and again ... and again ... ad infinitum |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat Distance indeed can touch...like rain from cloud to skin, in a drought. The thirst makes the need very passionate indeed. Enjoyed! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Very nicely written! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If it weren't for this fly buzzing around my desk, I think I would just be content to sit here, open mouthed, in awe, at the feel of this piece.... I am so very fortunate to be reading one of the poets who just doesn't get in here often enough... but when you do come home? Everyone dances.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I would feel the drops from such passings trickle across bare skin and dance in pagan delight defying insignificance" Oh, I would love to dance that dance, right here and now. Beautiful poetry. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooooh this makes me want to dance in pagan delight right now!! ~Smiles and hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ron, this is so sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! Your words are always a dervish of inspiration, sweet friend, this is pure salsa, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A magnificent write! Thoroughly enjoyed dear poet. Exceptional! ThisDiamond |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautiful writing, as always, Captain... *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
....... Dude, you left me speechless! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sun we have aplenty - and rain but just a few drops. I wish I could say they've touched me half as much as your poem has..this is wonderful sir. |
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