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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2002-09-20 01:18 PM

tree-bark
   laughing
misshaped glee
with staff
and screamed
   invection
hurled

  "Not of this world!"
  "Not of this world!"

          phantom's fee
          Hee Hee!
               Hee Hee!
          forget this visage!
          return to beer!
          a nightmare in
               sneer
          Hee Hee!
               the fear

outcast
    caper
grotesque dream
of flesh
and keen
eyes of
    gnarled
obscene!

   "Obscene!"

          Nay!
              beholder
          Nay!
             in your head
          I skip and play!
          made from
               ignorant
          bread and clay

           AWAY!
                    AWAY!

© Copyright 2002 brian sites - All Rights Reserved

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-20 01:20 PM

This is a cool poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

2 posted 2002-09-20 01:21 PM

It sure is.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
Member

since 2002-09-20

Posts 155
Fraggle Rock

3 posted 2002-09-20 01:36 PM

Provoking images..a painting in my minds eye!! Lovely! Look forward to more obviously Dear Poet

bsquirrel

Deputy Moderator 5 Tours

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-09-20 01:36 PM

brian,
You caught the mischief
and masochism
of belong
and alone.

Mike

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2002-09-20 01:46 PM

smiling...you are SO wicked...I'm PROUD of you! Why did this remind me of Ian Anderson?

Captured it? Nay...this IS you!

love it.

just love it.

HEE HEE
HEE HEE

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2002-09-20 06:17 PM

Thanks brian, for the accept and for this little critter dance.

This is a great one. Everything it should be. Plus

~Ed

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

7 posted 2002-09-20 07:57 PM

Love this...made me smile.

Enjoyed
DeaDiAmore

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