1 slick_lady and Interloper…Acoustics Of Love

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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-05 03:45 PM

1 slick_lady and Interloper…Acoustics Of Love

He wrote:

I would write of you
Lazing by the calm sea shore
My words inflaming

She wrote:

Flammable moments
Once lit will forever burn
Composed in your fire

He replied:

Pianissimo
A slow quiet beginning
The adagio

She sighs:

Violins now play
Surrounding notes touch past edge
Whispering soul song

He breathes:

Symphony of love
Played by only two people
Sampling each other

She whispers:

Tasting sweet honey
Over and over again
Hunger from desire

He moans:

My heart is melting
My breath comes in rapid gasps
Matching her heartbeat

She aches:

Emotional tune
Expression heard in a sigh
As I breathe your air

They think:

This must be true love
I’ve never been so in sync
This must be heaven

They react:

Their bodies go limp
Perspiration lines their lips
Such satisfaction

They kiss:

Salt-sprinkled lips meet
Promising more than a word
Giving of themselves

Forever:

Now there is a rock
Set upon our molded clay
Forever today

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-05 03:47 PM

This is beautiful and romantic

Cold hands means a warm heart

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-09-05 04:36 PM

BRAVO!!!
This is a beautiful duet, both passionate and playful. Tastefully done.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-09-05 04:39 PM

nicely done indeed... blends well one with the other... I enjoyed!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-09-05 07:28 PM

Wonderful...enjoyed so much.
You two du-et so well together ...
~Hugs to you both~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-09-05 08:50 PM

Sighing with a smile here. Great!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2002-09-05 11:12 PM

I would say your melodies blend very well together....Helen is sharp and you're...very good, too

Seriously, this is an excellent collaboration. COngrats to you both

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-05 11:35 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, you two make such a perfect team, I LOVE IT, I love the form you both made together! (BIG GROUP HUG) This is a timeless classic, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Helen and Interloper, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2002-09-06 09:05 AM

Thanks to Helen for her inspire.
Thanks to all of you for your kind comments.
Thanks to you, too, Michael

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-09-06 09:14 AM

Well this sounds like the perfect romance, building up gradually to such a nice end.
Sandra

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

10 posted 2002-09-06 10:21 AM

Wonderful compilation of haikus.
Strong piece! You two have done a great job with this!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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