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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-05 05:17 PM

Vessel Of Affection

you were not
the first to love me
but I pray
you be the last
there is something
solid and clear
in glass
as sand is cast
a bubble expands
with inspire
started with cold
then hot from fire
when heat
and inspiration combine
reflective rainbows
cling within that shine
a crystal heart
worn within
contained to fill
again and again

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-05 10:28 PM

lovely metaphor of the bubble in the glass

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Krishankins

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since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-09-06 01:10 AM

I love the construction of love you portray in this. Fragile, yet enduring. NICE!!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-09-06 05:16 AM

Enjoyed...James

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-09-06 09:03 AM

Whoa! This has got to be the best yet.
Magnificent write

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2002-09-06 09:40 AM

Seems clear to me. Nice work.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-09-06 10:13 AM

Wonderful Helen!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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