Open Poetry #22 |
Dancing With A Smile |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dancing With A Smile I’m dancing with a smile from you It paints my sky in colours new I’m flying though the air so high Collecting rainbows from the sky Your music holds me in its beat I can’t resist your passion’s heat Watch me dancing there way up high Spinning and twirling cross the sky I’m waltzing on a floor for two While wrapped within the love of you My feet don’t even touch the floor When I’m with you I simply soar The warm smile from your loving heart Shows me that my true love can start I feel magic I know its here It touched me when you wiped my tear My hips are swaying to your beat I’m dancing with style watch my feet Nothing can hold me still at all I’m flying I don’t fear to fall If our tomorrow cannot be I will have your love’s memory If I don’t have another day I can say I loved anyway If tomorrow’s sun shines on us I’ll take that one day as a plus Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy dear, I have watched you grow poetically over this past year...and I see a lady growing as each day passes.... Ya doin good there girl! Love it, utterly! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You so eloquently captured a magical moment in time. Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful poem... Beautiful title.. Excellent write Marsha! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yes, and may every day shine with sunlight to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Mum this is excellent writing There I've praised you mum what more do you want? And where is the free verse mummy dearest? I'm waiting You know i wub you weally love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers at every pore with instant fires Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 [This message has been edited by Krissy (09-06-2002 12:58 PM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I love the positive outlook in these words! Nicely done! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
collecting rainbows brightly colored necklaces to adorn your neck |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I feel magic I know its here It touched me when you wiped my tear This poem is soft and lovely Marsha - enjoyed it very much. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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