Open Poetry #22 |
Elegy du Evanescence |
RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
"Deep in the heart of....., downsize to a county, to five (occupied) bedrooms and a pool, Vous mentez je souffre detached garage, a dog, and two cats. Shrink to an apartment, a parking lot, one dead fish, Vous cueillez je decouvre endless Sun, bleached prairie. Deforest then whittle down rights, shave pride, husk money, dwindle time. Vous punissez j'espere Seeming respite in a tale of the Moon, moistened patch, brown eyes. Carve on the heart. Tu geles j'eteins Each door smaller, shrivel to a corner, morph aphasic. Vengeful greedy eyes mirror none cowered. Tu prend je pars The cord of my bolas tightened to adequacy for its heavy load. j'ecrirai Fin? Translation; You lie I suffer You gather I unmask You punish I hope You freeze I extinguish You take I leave I will write |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done.... very nice indeed. sometime it is in the writing that we are able to wrap some sanity around all that is in us.... I enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very interesting, and deserving of another read. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells Well done, enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In writing you rend Excellent. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richard Could almost be two poems, the translation seemed so complete in itself. Keep writing no matter your space! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
J'espere que vous ecriverez encore!---What I hope I'm is that, "I hope you that you will write again!" The older I get, the less I remember of the French I learned in highschool! I have to tell you, I truly was affected my this piece. I can identify with what you are talking about. You have expressed it so well, there's no need for me to! Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RSWells~ The title drew me in ... the content kept me~ In spite of the ephemerality of it all ... a message that stays with this reader~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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