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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2002-09-03 02:06 PM

I know you still love him,
Your mind is no where else.
It's over, your heart can't win
Your soul's wrapped up in hell.
You can't deal with the truth,
He left with your best friend
I know that your world's gone blue
but I wish you'd let me in

Chorus:
I can caress your heart and cloud those
Memories of him,
I just need you in my arms,
To show you love again
Girl I can be the sun in your mind
When your thoughts grow dim.
I just need you in my arms
To show you love again.

I know broken hearts can mend,
Cause I've watched them come around
So realize you can start again
Please girl don't shut me out
There's more than one chance to love
With the joy two can share
I wish I could gain your trust
I wish I could reach you there....

Bridge:
I fight the tears in my eyes
As I watch you fade away,
The lonely fears you hide,
Make me wish you could hear me say.

Chorus:
I can caress your heart and cloud those
Memories of him,
I just need you in my arms,
To show you love again
Girl I can be the sun in your mind
When your thoughts grow dim.
I just need you in my arms
to show you love again.

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The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

[This message has been edited by ethome (09-03-2002 02:07 PM).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-03 02:20 PM

This is such a fine song with deeply heartfelt emotion. Well done Ethan!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-03 02:44 PM

I would love to be able to hear the melody but the song is in my heart.

Linda

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2002-09-03 03:41 PM

What a beautiful soulful piece. The music is built in. I am so glad I got to read this.
ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-09-03 03:44 PM

Very beautiful Eric!
Enjoyed this one today...for sure.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-09-03 03:45 PM

1derful, Eric. Just 1derful!
I love it

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-09-03 04:34 PM

Nicely done ET...lots of singing going on
at PiP lately, huh?

You sang this well...what lady could ever
resist this sincere desire of commitment
and honor...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-09-03 04:39 PM

ethome,
Reminds me of a song off Pet Sounds -- Here Today.

Right now you think that she's perfection
This time is really an exception
Well you know I hate to be a downer
But I'm the guy she left before you found her

It's all a circle.

Mike

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-09-03 04:58 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eric, this is so compassionately beautiful, sweet friend, and may she let you kiss all her tears away and together you will find true comfort! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May loven and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2002-09-04 10:22 PM

Eric

You can find such stories of heart, like you've been in all...stage front...and the rhythm and music feel, I think you were born with.

alterego
Member

since 2002-02-23

Posts 113
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2002-09-04 10:51 PM

I just need to work out a few kinks in the tune,
and once I get my PC and Digital Ensemble married (sssoooooonnn),
I will be able to hammer it out properly,
And link it to you handily.

Oh well, really liked it, and didn't want to see a Canadian boy swallowed in the late-night of overseas posts - up you go o o o o o o.

Sheila

Create something infinite today - Smile!!!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2002-09-05 09:11 AM

Ethome, I really like this but the chorus
just says so much. What a talent you are!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2002-09-05 09:18 AM

Oh Eric, I can hear the acoustic version now!

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