Open Poetry #22 |
Expectation |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Expectation Each season gratifies the eyes and ears With newness to the rhythms of the earth A child sips the cup of future years A mother, the esteem of coming birth All seasons have a beauty of their own Each change anticipated with delight A flower sips the cup of rising sun And gives no heed to passing of the night Upon a new horizon eyes engage To seek that special dream we’ve held within We sip the golden chalice of each age With expectations pouring from the brim But oh, how life so swiftly turns the page How fast upon us comes the winter wind Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (08-23-2002 09:31 AM).] |
||
© Copyright 2002 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved | |||
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so true Liz..a lovely sonnet *s M |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I guess I think I'm still 30...I feel like I've a long way to go, and yet, yet...the wind is a'nipping at my heels... thank you, Lady Santos! |
||
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful, Liz. And, very true. |
||
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A delightful and charming write. But then you are delightful and charming. Sy |
||
Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
They say that Winter is the cruelest. But, I think that they need to look again. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
||
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Elizabeth, this is so very true, sweet friend, life indeed passes us by so very quickly yet if we live up to each moment we will find true joy! (kiss on cheek) This is superb, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful Liz, and as always you write with such grace and wisdom~ Tae care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
||
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
But oh, how life so swiftly turns the page How fast upon us comes the winter wind So very true... so very wise, so very well written... I really enjoyed this one, Liz ~ hugs of wisdom Lyra |
||
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nakdthoughts, Thanks, I appreciate your comment Sunshine, Only 30! It's bearly summer! The winds are far ahead. SmartChich, Your words mean so much Sy, Oh, how sweet you are. Glad you liked the poem Moonlight Romeo, All seasons are beautiful and unique. I marvel at each one in nature and in life. THank you Noah, I always appreciate your thoughtful comments, THanks, dear poet Melissa, Thank you, dear for your kind remarks. Always nice to see you Lyra, Yes these lines are so true. I'm so glad you liked this one. I'm going to have a 7th grandchild, so swiftly the years pass. Thank you, dear heart |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling here...I "think" I'm 30...but I know I'm not! LOL.... |
||
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sunshine, As long as you THINK you are, that's all that matters! You've too much wisdom for a 30 year old You EARNED it! Liz |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes |
||
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz As winter approaches I see from the distance of Summer, how I long for its cool fingers. Loved this...and you! |
||
NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'...But oh, how life so swiftly turns the page How fast upon us comes the winter wind' Hmmm, Elizabeth...I was trying to explain this concept to my 22 year old just this morning. Life begins to fly by and the older we get the quicker is moves. But at 22, this is not something to be understood. May I have your permission to send him a copy of your poem? Thank you, Marti |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |