Open Poetry #22 |
Pines - Inspired by Earth Angel |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Illumination wakes sleeping forest spirits bringing dance to limbs Soughing needles sang murmuring suddenly singed moonlight cradling Pine song wind song cries incandescent spirits fly embers, ashes, dust |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea! Oh how I love to hear the pines whisper! Have a fantastic day! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
bringing dance to limbs... that's outstanding work, O Poetess... Regards to you Karilea, Sudhir |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Wow, oh my gosh, Linda is a fabulous writer just like you are, this is just beautiful, I love the swaying voice of your words, thank you for this delightful morning read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine---You brighten my day! Good morning!Good morning! Good morning! It pleases me greatly that I, in some way, was the inspiration for your writing this. The word "beautiful" may be considered an over-used word in the English Language---but it's concept certainly isn't! So, this is what I think of your writing---BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Good morning bright ray fo sun. Wonderful write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah--After posting my reply to Sunshine, I noticed your comment re my writing, and may I just say this, dear prince of the PIP people---that means so very much to me---and believe me, the feeling is mutual! Thank you! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-05-2002 11:50 AM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sun, Here's hoping those fires will be contained, but never the fire of yr words. Mike |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - just awesome....I can almost smell that sweet scent of pine. Enjoyed, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea It is sad for me to see the smoke rising from my place of peace in the mountains, Michelle's home. I think the pines do cry, along with so many animals that have lost there homes. Hugs for this one. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, as I finalized this little piece, I knew very well that if you were to see it, you would know in your heart what I miss, and that I was thinking how you must feel, so close to this as you are. Thank you, everyone, for taking a moment out of your day to cast your eyes over this... |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
gracious Rain cools ground from sky, Life from Death~~~~~rises. I need to add this in some consolitory effort to say that life although destroyed and drove away, will return... did you know that pine trees "seeds" are set free to grow a new forest from the ashes of the old. It is nature's version of re-incarnation. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (09-05-2002 06:36 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sherry is right about reincarnation...but the sadness is that it will take most of our children's lifetimes to return the forest to what it is now... Yes, pines are beautiful...except when you are raking up all the needles...That is my job every week....but I do love them... and I love this poem dear Sunny one.... and to Linda...thank you for inspiring the golden one to write yet another beauty... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Magnus---I just dropped back in to read "the Golden One"'s" poem again and to read the wonderful responses she receives---I read yours, and I must admit, it did thrill me that she posted that this poem was inspired by me. (Sunshine---thank you so much for that!)Again I must say, "BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL,BEAUTIFUL" Linda |
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