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Bye My Love
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Bye My Love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Bye my love as a tear of trace falls into timelessness Bye my love as the beat slows in ebb... Bye my love for each moment and memory... each time I hear or see... or taste, smell or sense... shall last a life of a thousand lives... I can only say bye.... For “good” is a word that does not fit with “bye” when all there is.... Is now only a memory... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you're right. this is a sad one from you...not used to those |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am pleased to say that it is pure fiction, thank goodness....Just stretching wings on a clear day...when I should be writing happy thoughts.... Thanx PS... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are so right! I don't like farewells---there's nothing "good" about them! ---and isn't it ironic that a greeting such as "hello" begins with "hell"!!! Wouldn't the following words be more appropriate? "hell-bye" instead of "good-bye" "goodo" instead of "hello" There! That's better! Makes more sense now, doesn't it? Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-05-2002 08:02 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart and writer of nights wonder, this is breathtakingly lovely. I could sit and drink at the fountain of your wisdom from dawn to moonset, and still I would find you infinitely fascinating, I would garner knowledge in your garden of wordy delight. Shower my soul in your voice and let my mind tread the ways of truth you have mapped. This is sad but incredibly beautifully written, as always you write divinely darling man and I love it utterly utterly love it. One of your extra special ones darling heart, I’m glad I got to see this   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I can only say bye.... For “good” is a word that does not fit with “bye” when all there is.... Is now only a memory... -------------------------------------------- Dang...you're good Barry!! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Barry, this is so true, nothing good about goobye. You said it! Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tender is the render of heart... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, I understand just how you feel, and also that the memories are not good, but they are truly dazzling and bye just fits the sincere and heartfelt feeling! (sigh) This is beautifully aching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Emotive writing...goodbyes can be sad, but also can open up doors to hello.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I don't like good-byes, so let us not. Magnus this was an interesting piece of work. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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