Orb of Day, Orb of Night....Star Bright

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-09-03 08:15 PM

Vas...you made me do this...

When darkness falls the daytime sky
and rolls the star filled carpet out
When streams of light touches the night
and beams of moon begin to sprout

From glow of night and stars in shine
where love does bask within the beam.
As hearts then beat the warrior’s drum
beneath the falls of clearest stream.

Where streaks of light now fall to earth
upon the land born of the ages.
And long ago the sailors viewed
a land before the parchment pages.

From in the beam of basking light
a sparkle comes to shine above.
One little glow of moonlit sky
wherein is born a waiting love.

Beyond the stone of henge in wait
of rise the glow of waiting fire.
Where eons found a message sent
from the rays of a sun filled spire.

A world that stands between the ball
of orange and red in blazing heat.
In wait of rise and search of fall
as each new day is now complete.

And as the light does bring the view
of sight the land that lies below.
A golden orb with sterling hue
shall bask the earth in warming glow.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-09-03 08:46 PM

Astrologically, I am a Leo and that sign is represented by the sun---so I thank you for honouring my sun sign! Kudos

Light, Light & Light!!!
Linda

Tammy Blessing
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

2 posted 2002-09-03 09:32 PM

Magnus, this is wonderful!!

From in the beam of basking light
a sparkle comes to shine above.
One little glow of moonlit sky
wherein is born a waiting love.

**sigh**
Peace,love,light and happiness
Tammy

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-09-03 09:32 PM

Magnus darling heart oh wonderful truly wonderful, NO ONE does it like you. Truly awesome writing darling heart I’m awe-struck at this piece of starlight’s caress. I really love it and this is a definite keeper, Can you feel me slipping into your mind then brushing against the touch of your soul as it walks in the place of knowledge? Such a pleasure it is to take a stroll in the garden of your mind and sipping from the well of wisdom, and I would do so until time stands still and the stars no longer shine.

This really is an exquisite piece from you darling heart I love it utterly utterly, thank you for the drops of sweetness you sprinkle in my soul daily. This is so truly you wonderful I love it utterly utterly utterly love it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

4 posted 2002-09-03 10:40 PM

I see the face of word
dancing on unthought sheets
It is painted....now
with your soul color

jeff
so clear and fresh, this was Barry.
Not at all trite, in any way,
and full of delight.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-03 10:47 PM

(smiles) Oh Barry, this is beautiful, I love it, and may the sun always be the touchstone to hope, that it will rise ever so more after each setting and signal harbingers of promises to come! (big hugggsssssss) This is magnificent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-09-03 10:52 PM

Excellent Barry!!!
May I just give a big ole Canadian sigh??
I knew you would say okay...
*SIGH*

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

7 posted 2002-09-04 09:01 PM

And as the light does bring the view
of sight the land that lies below.
A golden orb with sterling hue
shall bask the earth in warming glow.

such beautiful words. wow.

Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you. - Friedrich W. Nietzsche

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-09-04 09:22 PM

Barry

One of your best...and they are all bests.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2002-09-04 10:47 PM

...golden orb of sterling hue...

If held in the hands...this would be the heart. Lovely write. ThisDiamond

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 2002-09-04 11:05 PM

Twp thumbs up on this one, Barry

You did an excellent job with the symbols and expressions

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