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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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If smiles must lead to dust softly, beginnings, do not touch the moment I kiss, winter arrives drive around daisies drive. paintings of windows, of dreams, of fools, symbols crashing monkey teeth wind the spiral is void placed on a stick whisper child, set the world spinning garden of upward poet is standing reciting a sunset into the sky unbinding the wilt of lilt, of fire arrive as a verse, swooning the Spring poet whose fingers gather the strings child upon page scribbling terse cannot cast his crayons away essence is gathered as it is found pretty gone trimmings of Sodom’s decay crayon shavings, both colored and none swept to the floor like and both as if smiles must lead, truly, to dust then smile again, duly, I must |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
and smile I'll this is my kinda writing fast with plenty of rocks sticking out or is that wrafting? same thing goodgood BS I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like it lots, Walt. Sandra |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
"garden of upward poet is standing reciting a sunset into the sky unbinding the wilt of lilt, of fire arrive as a verse, swooning the Spring," is MAD CRAZY COOL WITH CHERRIES ON BOTTOM OF A CHERRY SLUSH WITH THE REAL CHERRY COKE FROM SONIC! this stanza is IT! package them like this and adults will be transformed to children and be begging for your candy. (...up to here i hadn't absorbed the whole poem) so now, i think the whole poem has passion, i can feel it. your pic has been painted. i'll say that the last stanza is awesum as well, as not to take away from the other stanzas...the whole poem is miracle grow! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wayoutwalt Alas alac it is a fact, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Yes, never let anything tarnish that child deep inside of you, for if life is not about smiling, then there is really no reason what a life is for! (sigh) Always believe in what makes you happy, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ You sure earned the WOW with this one~ Some killer-diller lines in here~ Uniquely wonderful~ Keep it coming, poet sir~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you all soo much i needed something like this |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Sweet poet |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Walt ... I must echo Marge ... creative and unique, with wonderful phrasing ... very much enjoyed, my friend! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Hi Walt!  Well done!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks you two yuh yuh |
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Fandaen Junior Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 47Ft Worth, Texas |
Very nice Walt, you have the gift. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Waltie Baby! It was worth the wait. Or am I the one that's been gone? Cool and far out! You do know how to stretch my mind and that's a good thing.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Waltyyyy... jeez, I've missed ya, it's so good to see you and to read you dear, I love it when you write like this. Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (09-09-2002 03:15 AM).] |
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