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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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To say you occupy all my thoughts would not even be close to expressing how very much of my mind is filled with you. Suffice to say all other thoughts fight for space. WhiteRose The White Rose~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhiteRose Goot thought, good write, good read. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Suffice to say all other thoughts fight for space ---------------- wonderfully said... regards, Sudhir |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Simply wonderful! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Suffice to say all other thoughts fight for space. Very cool verse. I liked the style of this. Good write! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sudhir and Duncan selected the same verse to include in their replies, as I was about to do----I suppose, in a way, I just did! Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is beautiful  More, please... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Tres cool...brief and beautiful. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Anne, I understand just how you feel, sweet friend, it seems Joanna floods 100% of my mind almost, she's so breathtakingly beautiful! (sigh) May love always bring heaven to your mind, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
Dear Anne, This is a beautiful poem thank you for sharing, I understand how you feel. Andrea |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very well said. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hmmm...all other thoughts fight for space? Very well said, the last stanza adds a lot of power to the feelings... Nicely done Anne... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you all so very much. Your responses mean a lot to me. What would I do without this place now? I shudder to think. You are all very special to me. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WhiteRose - many thoughts can fill a mind, but only one that is wanted most need come true... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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