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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-09-03 10:42 AM



To say you occupy
all my thoughts
would not
even be close
to expressing
how very much
of my mind
is filled with you.

Suffice to say
all other thoughts
fight for space.

WhiteRose

The White Rose~
A simple expression
of classic beauty.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-09-03 10:46 AM


WhiteRose
Goot thought, good write, good read.

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2002-09-03 10:52 AM


Suffice to say
all other thoughts
fight for space
----------------
wonderfully said...

regards,
Sudhir

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3 posted 2002-09-04 01:43 PM


Simply wonderful!
Duncan
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4 posted 2002-09-04 02:24 PM


Suffice to say
all other thoughts
fight for space.

Very cool verse.  I liked the style of this.  Good write!

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-04 03:47 PM


Sudhir and Duncan selected the same verse to include in their replies, as I was about to do----I suppose, in a way, I just did!

Linda

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6 posted 2002-09-04 04:14 PM


This is beautiful
More, please...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2002-09-04 04:39 PM


Tres cool...brief and beautiful.
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8 posted 2002-09-04 09:32 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, I understand just how you feel, sweet friend, it seems Joanna floods 100% of my mind almost, she's so breathtakingly beautiful! (sigh) May love always bring heaven to your mind, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

TradingSpaces19
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9 posted 2002-09-13 06:40 PM


Dear Anne,

This is a beautiful poem thank you for sharing, I understand how you feel.

Andrea

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10 posted 2002-09-13 07:09 PM


Very well said. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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11 posted 2002-09-13 07:51 PM


Hmmm...all other thoughts fight for space?

Very well said,  the last stanza adds a lot
of power to the feelings...
Nicely done Anne...

WhiteRose
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12 posted 2002-09-14 12:39 PM


Thank you all so very much. Your responses mean a lot to me. What would I do without this place now? I shudder to think. You are all very special to me.
Bill Charles
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13 posted 2002-09-14 04:51 PM


WhiteRose - many thoughts can fill a mind, but only one that is wanted most need come true...


BC

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14 posted 2002-09-15 11:08 PM


Very nice...James
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