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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-09-13 04:55 AM


Time To Count
The Cost

I'm sorry I hurt you.
I'm sorry I lied.
I'm sorry I
couldn't please you
now that I've cried.

I'm sorry I hurt you.
You know it's time
to count the cost
when you lose what
you love and you miss
what you lost.

JamesLee
Sept11
2002

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Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2002-09-13 05:18 AM


James...Very enjoyable and somewhat sad...Paul
pmc
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2 posted 2002-09-13 06:33 AM


James,
you seem to be going through a difficult time.
I hope everything works out OK.

pmc

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3 posted 2002-09-13 08:11 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, your last few poems feel so sad, if you need anyone to talk to I am here, just send me an e-mail and I will be happy to talk to you! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-09-15 11:07 PM


Thank you Paul, pmc and Noah for the nice responses...
I'm fine...all of us go through good and bad times...I write of both...James

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