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dalainn New Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 6 |
Your Fruits ----------- I will no longer be the equivalent as in the past. I have been wounded by your dialect. They are razor-sharp and stir hatred in my central point. You were formerly a bed of flowers that sat comely below the sun. Now you control an army of wrongdoers. They were at one time my friends. Nowadays they abide by you because of the deception you planted. You recognize the reality. It lays in your malicious conscious and it will rest in you. I will no longer be the equivalent as in the past. I have emerged from my demise. A demise you hurled me into. I now anticipate the encounter of your facade. You will see your fruits. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hello, welcome to passions! I'm moving this to Open Poetry, where it will receive the proper attention. Thanks, Christopher |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Delainn, this was good. I liked the way you got your words across...not hateful, put to the point. Sounds like you were hurt by words of others. I may be wrong, but if I'm right...I'm sorry you were hurt. I wish so much that all people would think of what they're saying before they speak. The consequences of words can be so negative....or so positive. I guess this is one reason that I like poetry so well...most of the time people do a lot of thinking before they actually put the final touches to a poem. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Love to all, Ethel...garysgirl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Like that proverbial firebird, you arise from the ashes, stronger. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
dalainn Interesting write, enjoyed the read. |
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