Open Poetry #21 |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I know you don’t want poems written about you, I recall the sermon: write about social biases, poverty, or politics - the world is larger than us! I bury this verse beneath attempts to solidify my watery slant on compassion. You once said: thinking beings are meant to live like children and love like Jesus. My heart is not that open - forgive me if I covet yours. © 2002 C.M. Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (06-27-2002 06:21 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggssssss) Oh Corinne, this is a powerful dedication, sweet friend, it is wonderful how one person alone can inspire another so very much! (smiles) Ia ms ure that deep down you have taught Stephen so much too, sweet friend, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, I like it, I like it. Well done. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems like this good man got a poem about himself, after all...and I like it! I think I'd like him, too! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne Hard to argue with his thoughts...but it's the little things, that mean a lot. For when you look at love with poets eyes, it is more like he and I. Your poems always touch me in a place that gives me ponder..thank you for that. |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
Very sweet, Corinne. ~SM |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks everyone for commenting! Cor |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would say that, perhaps, you need not covet that heart as much these days. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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